V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E|| New Set. 9/20 Updated! Third Fusion Put Up! Finally, A Rosa!

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When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can destroy another monster by this card's effect whose DEF is equal to or less than the ATK of the destroyed monster.

 

 

A duo of elite reconnaissance agents equipped with a Divinity Class A.L.I.E.N vehicle. Their physical combat prowess and piloting expertise make them a force to be reckoned with, and their stealth abilities often make them a force unseen.

 

Fusion material main card!

 

 

An abandoned project, this soldier was the first prototype for the V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E ultimate weapon. Though not given the weapons of its successors, this soldier is gifted with manipulable genetics and a highly compatible operating system. Her abilities to combine with others has not been outmatched, though her memories are erased.

 

 

A soldier that specializes in destroying enemy land vehicles. Capable of firing 8 armor-penetrating shots at once, this soldier brings devastating power to the battlefield. The shots cannot lock on to separate targets whoever, so this fighter saves shots for the large vehicles, while other combatants take down small ones.

 

"V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Crush Claw" + "V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Tactical Heavy Shot"

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above monsters you control. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by battle, destroy all monsters your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than or equal to the DEF of the destroyed monster. Both players take 200 Points of Damage for each card destroyed.

 

 

Created for the purpose of repairing damaged units, this soldier has few weapons. Repairs being crucial to battle, however, she does have impressive defensive ability, able to take hard hits from many foes and still be unharmed.

 

 

"V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Systems Repair" + "V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - R3con"

When this card is Summoned, your opponent must reveal their hand. When this card destroys a monster by battle, your opponent must shuffle their hand into their Deck and draw cards equal to the amount they had in their previous hand.

 

 

Brute Bodies are heavily armed, powerful soldier suits. They are used in situations that require obstacles moved without explosives. Though their size seems to be a burden, the hands on a Brute Body are actually have 50 times the dexterity of a human hand and require powerful computers to operate.

 

 

"V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Tabula Rosa" + V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Dragon F.I.R.E"

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above monsters you control. (You do not use Polymerization.) When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle, destroy all monsters your opponent controls with an ATK or DEF lower than the ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster. For every monster destroyed, inflict 200 Points of Damage to each player for each card destroyed. If you control 1 or more "V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Systems Repair", you do not take Damage by this card's effect.

 

 

 

Yeah... The Level 4 monsters will be Vanilla, and I intend to have a lot of fusions; it's kinda like E-hero in those aspects. Effect complexity grows with Summoning difficulty. Well, I can show you better. I'll put others up soon. I like the picture for this card; came across it browsing. Yes, the fist fusion doesn't include Tabula. Don't worry, the boss monster fusion does.[/align]

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Since you'll have Vanillas, I expect some support.

This card is a great start for this set; it's nice and simple.

OCG looks good and I like the pic.

 

10/10

Can't wait to see more!

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Thanks! First Vanilla is up!

[Yang Xiao-Long]

FINALLY! A decent Vanilla!

Actually, this Vanilla should be made real; its description is so much better than those bland descriptions in TCG.

Pic is awesome.

10/10

(I think this is my first 10 on a Vanilla.)

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Whoot! Two 10/10's in a row! Thanks!

[FriendlyHost]

nicely done 9.5/10

[~Duo~]

Wow, nice cards, but I think V.A.L.K.R.I.E. - Tactical Heavy Shot is slightly (extremely little) OP'd, because what if you attacked something with a high DEF, like E-Hero Clayman? You can destroy lots of options. Vanilla is very descriptive, nice! 9.5/10

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Bump. Woah, long downtime.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

I couldn't get on for like 99% of the day because of troubleshooting...

 

I see new cards! Nice ones too. Really nice and -oh! A Fusion!

Your Vanilla descriptions are novels. I'm serious. Get those printed. NAO.

The Fusion is cool. Nice way to clear the field and it has drawbacks.

OCG looks good.

 

10/10

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Thanks! Another Fusion is up! The next three will involve Tabula Rosa. This one keeps things random for the opponent, their hand constantly changes when a monster is destroyed.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

I love how devastating that effect can be for your opponent.

Pic fits it perfectly.

 

Same rate as above.

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Thanks!

[touzaikokon]

Effect(s): A lot of vanillas, but on your effect monsters, they look solid. (3 points)

 

Grammar: Fixes listed by monster:

 

When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' you can destroy [b']1[/b] monster with DEF is equal to or less than the ATK of the destroyed monster.

 

"V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Crush Claw" + "V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Tactical Heavy Shot"

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above monsters you control. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' destroy all monsters your opponent controls [b']with [/b]ATK lower than or equal to the DEF of the destroyed monster. Inflict 200 damage to each player for each card destroyed.

(Not 100% sure on this one).

 

"V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - Systems Repair" + "V.A.L.K.Y.R.I.E - R3con"

When this card is Summoned' date=' your opponent must reveal their hand. When this card destroys a monster by battle, your opponent [b']shuffles [/b]their hand into their Deck and draws cards equal to the amount of cards they shuffled into the Deck.

 

That's all I've got. Pretty good, just small things. (2 points).

 

Style: All nice, they fit together. And you use Vanillas, but in a good way. Kudos. (3 points).

 

 

Overall: 8/10

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Thanks! I'll fix that. :J

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Bump.

[Inferno I20]

for crush claw i think you misspelled however. you put whoever

 

i assume that the main point of this archetype is to f**k you up...jk XD

the pics on the cards are HOT!!! also kidding or am i?

 

the cards are pretty good so far, i wonder what the other fusions will look like

 

9.5/10

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Thanks! Yeah, I've got a few typing errors. I'll fix those when I finish the next card.

[aquadragon1050]

I like the idea a lot. Personally, I think that the vanillas might be a bit too strong (there is only one 4 star 2000 attack vanilla right now, and he exists because he has no support), but I do like the idea and flavor of the cards a lot. 8/10

[Lord Smeagle]

You should add Normal Monster Support.

 

But these cards seem to be good. Datawiper probably warrants a PG-13 warning, though that might be counterproductive...w/e.

 

9.8/10.

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Thanks! Yeah, i have some support cards I'm working on. Hm... I lost everything from my old Fan-fic. Perhaps I'll make a fan-fic for this set.

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I'll update soon, guys. I was busy today and then hurt my foot.

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Bump. Update up in a few minutes.