Rampant Rager! (Comments appreciated)

[Dandelo]

 

If a monster you control inflicts damage to your opponent equal to this card's Level x 100 or more, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If Summoned in this way, whenever this card inflicts damage to your opponent equal to its Level x 100 or more, this card can attack once again in a row. If this card attacks your opponent directly, the damage is halved.

[syncfan2012]

Its effect gets kinda confusing (specifically the part about inflicting damage x 100 or more) and i think its UP for a level five. Creative though. And good pic (which I'm starting to realize is a hard thing to find)

[Zextra]

Nice effect, pretty original. Um, that's a new concept (level x 100 damage) but I like it. However, you realize that this card could start a chain:

Ex:

Your Field: Rampant Rager

Opponent's Field: Random Monster in attack position (Luster Dragon ATK 1900)

-You attack: opponent-500 LP

-500=100x5

-Rampant Rager attacks directly over and over again, because it is inflicting more than 500 points each time.

 

Try revising this, but not bad: 7.5/10

[Dandelo]

Ah, good catch. Should've said when it inflicts damage to your opponent through battle.

[touzaikokon]

If a monster you control inflicts damage to your opponent equal to this card's Level x 100 or more' date=' you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If Summoned in this way, whenever this card inflicts damage to your opponent equal to its Level x 100 or more, this card can attack once again in a row. If this card attacks your opponent directly, the damage is halved.[/quote']

 

Effect: Halving the battle damage is an okay limiter, but it still doesn't put this card under the threshold for attacking again. It's creative, but it needs to be more balanced, because you can build a whole OTK around this. (2 points).

 

Grammar: Here's my fix. (2 points).

"If a monster you control inflicts damage to your opponent equal to or greater than this card's Level x 100, You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card was Summoned this way, when this card inflicts damage to your opponent greater than or equal to this card's Level x 100, it can attack once again in a row. All direct damage this card inflicts is halved."

 

Style:Looks cool. You should put a set number on it for that finishing touch. But everything else is boss. (2 points).

 

 

Overall: 6/10