DesktopTemple Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 The one on the left is the "first card". The one on the right is the 2nd Edition. :) I'm sorry, I couldn't do anything about the OCG :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 OCG errors. Other then that its ok. Underpowered tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesktopTemple Posted January 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 I was worried he would be overpowered... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Its not really, 100 is nothing, and 50 is just even less lol It can easyly be removed from the field, however Its fantastically good for your first card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 a good try for your first cardit could be reworded a bit but still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesktopTemple Posted January 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Yey :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 u should have put this card gains not this card will gain, on your cards effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Yeah, its a bit underpowered. The image could be a bit better too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesktopTemple Posted January 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 What's wrong with the image? I don't see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Not bad. Great for your first card. OCG errors all over the place but I can understand what you mean. Keep up the good work.Nice pic 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Underpowered but good pic and effect isn't really excellent just good[spoiler=Rating]5/10[spoiler=Grade]C-[spoiler=Star]* * * 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 OCG probekmns, plus it is underpowered. 100 ATK and only 50 DEF? 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesktopTemple Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 Edit to First Post: V2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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