♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Hola :3 I'm new here! I've been checking out these threads for like 2 months now practicing and today I made an account and my first card! I decided to make a project on it, too. Comments rock =P! Updates ~EN012 - Meda Bat~ ~EN013 - Man Eater~ [spoiler=EN001-EN010] When this card is destroyed by battle, you can select 1 "D.D" monster that is removed from play and Special Summon it (except "D.D. Trainer"). When this card is sent to the Graveyard (except by battle) you can remove from play 1 monster on the field. You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard when a face-up "Blazing Inpachi" is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Special Summoned, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 monster with "Inpachi" in it's name from your hand. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Left Leg of the Forbidden One" from your Deck to your hand. If this card is sent directly from your hand to the Graveyard by the effect of a card you control, you can pay 1000 Life Points to add this card from Graveyard to your hand. If this is the only card in your hand during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and 1 Level 5 Normal Monster from your Graveyard. If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard by the effect of "Blaze Accelerator", you can add 1 "Volcanic Rat" from your Deck to your hand. While this card is face-up on the field, "Ojama" monsters you control cannot be selected as an attack target (except "Ojama Green"). Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to have 1 "Ojama" monster you control gain 1000 DEF until the End Phase of this turn. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflict Battle Damage, you can discard 1 card to add 1 "Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive" from your Deck to your hand. This card gains 100 ATK for each "Harpie Lady" in your Graveyard. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Harpie" monster from your hand. When a monster Special Summoned by this effect is removed from the field, it is removed from play. When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of "The Agent of Creation - Venus" you gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is removed from the field (except by battle), you can add 1 LIGHT monster from your Deck to your hand. Spiders Love This! When this card is destroyed, you can remove it from play to Special Summon an Insect-Type monster from your Deck with a Level equal to this cards Level +2. You can remove this card in your Graveyard from play to switch all monsters your opponent controls to Defense Position. [spoiler=EN011-EN020] Limited to 1 per Deck and Flamvells love this! You can discard this card from your hand to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by this effect, Special Summon 2 "Hinotama Tokens"(Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 100/ DEF 100) in Attack Position. These Tokens can only be Tributed for the Tribute Summon of a Pyro-Type monster. Each time a "Hinotama Token" is removed from the field, your opponent takes 300 damage. This card can attack your opponent directly. this card is destroyed during your End Phase. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your hand. That monster's effect(s) are negated. This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this card is face-up on the field, Plant-Type monsters cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, you can return 1 removed from play Plant-Type monster to your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Hello ♥Kärë Bëär♥ and welcome to YCM! I am Leo and I would be glad to answer any questions you have. ;D. So, on with your card. As you might have seen with my rates, I rate comparing the cards with the TCG game, and I will do no different here ;D. The first effect, as I can see, needs some modifying to make it a little less broken. D.D. Trainer can Special Summon "ITSELF", meaning a nice lockdown for your opponent ;D. Add saying that you cannot Special Summon "D.D Trainer" with this effect like this: (except "D.D. Trainer".) The rest of the effect is nice. I find it a different Dimensional Prision. For a first, you did an AMAZING job. Better then some of the card makers here. I expect seeing great cards from you as you show great potential as a card maker! Hope to see some more of your fine work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Welcome, and great remake. Like the pic? O.o I can't tell, but unless it's from the original card, which I forgot the name to, it's nice. I don't think it's D.D Trainer... Is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Welcome' date=' and great remake. Like the pic? O.o I can't tell, but unless it's from the original card, which I forgot the name to, it's nice. I don't think it's D.D Trainer... Is it?[/quote'] This is a remake of the Normal Monster "D.D Trainer" in the Yu-Gi-Oh! TCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 ^^! Thanks both! And yep :3 I've seen you rating a couple threads Leo. May I ask what Broken means? I'll add the (except "D.D. Trainer") part too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 This is a remake of the Normal Monster "D.D Trainer" in the Yu-Gi-Oh! TCG. OK, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 ^^! Thanks both! And yep :3 I've seen you rating a couple threads Leo. May I ask what Broken means? I'll add the (except "D.D. Trainer") part too. Broken (In a TCG Card Term) - Referring to when a card is very powerful. It can be used with cards to make a very powerful combo, like an FTK (First Turn Kill) or an OTK (One Turn Kill). Pretty much something the is really powerful. Another term you will see which is more popular here is OPed, which basiclly means Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Broken is when an effect is too powerful and can be abused in many situations. Leo may correct me if I'm wrong. Note: I was writing this up before I saw leo's post D< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Welcome to the YCM! I'm kinda new here as well. Now onto the card.Haven't seen a remake in awhile. Great remake. I can see a simple loop from this card.But like Leo had said,you should add the (except "D.D Trainer".) part to it.His second effect is pretty good as well. Like Leo has also said before,A D-Prison but you get to choose the target ;DNo OCG Errors as well. You did a great first card.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Thanks everyone ^^! And thanks King Matrix and Leo for explaining what broken means :3 Card Edited and New Card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Already a new card? That was quite fast. Now lets see about Charcoal Inpachi...No OCG Errors. Pretty decent effect IMO.Fits the story of the Inpachi's as well. Blazing Inpachi dies.Special Charcoal Inpachi from the grave. Later on...Special Summon Woodborg Inpachi from your hand in Defense Position.If it's in your hand of course. A pretty decent combo going on their.Inpachi's are a really small archetype though,so doesn't give it deck potential.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Thanks! I have all the inpachi's so Im going to continue remaking them. New Card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Another new card!!! xD Exodia now eh? The new effect speeds up Exodia Decks a bit.Kinda makes them a bit more OP'd IMO though...The 1000 drawback to add it to your hand from the grave makes it more balanced I guess.Can see a combo with this card using CED. Pretty decent in all.9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 CED? I got the first effect from the Gadgets. I noticed that everyone who uses Exodia decks add multiples of all the pieces (except the head of course) so i thought it'd be useful. New Card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 CED = Compulsory Evacuation Device.The combo would be during the second turn to return the Leg back to your hand.That way your one card closer to getting all the pieces into your hand. Another new card!!!Interesting effect. Could be used in a Skill Drain deck if used at the right time.(Right before you use Skill Drain). Could be used for a quick Level 6 Synchro.Goyo Guardian and Brionac come to mind. This has potential in some decks IMO.9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Thanks a bunch :3 I was thinking of Brionac when I made it. New Card added. (Im making remakes of all the Normals I have while im organizing my cards.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 I feel so lonely being the only rating your cards at this moment... =( Oh well. Now Volcanic Rat.Simple effect. It recycles itself by getting another of it.Another simple combo while using this card. After all 3 end up in the Graveyard...Volcanic Recharge. Or maybe Pot of Avarice if you have 2 other monsters in your Grave.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Lol well thanks a bunch for being to loyal the this thread ^^ reps for you :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Updated!!! Lots of new card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 I can see I'm not the only one remaking Normal Monsters.Your cards are pretty good both in terms of effects and OCG.There are some slight mistakes, though, but nothing major:..."Inpachi" in its name from your hand....1000 Life Points to add this card from the Graveyard to your hand....directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, you can......you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster... Really good first set is forming here (although they are just remakes)I can see you like monsters with 500 ATK :DHere is a rating for now9.7/10Well done! ^^ P.S.: Are there going to be only 20 cards or you haven't decided yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 I can see I'm not the only one remaking Normal Monsters.Your cards are pretty good both in terms of effects and OCG.There are some slight mistakes' date=' though, but nothing major:[i']..."Inpachi" in its name from your hand....1000 Life Points to add this card from the Graveyard to your hand....directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, you can......you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster...[/i] Really good first set is forming here (although they are just remakes)I can see you like monsters with 500 ATK :DHere is a rating for now9.7/10Well done! ^^ P.S.: Are there going to be only 20 cards or you haven't decided yet? Thanks a bunch for the fixes! I'll edit them now ^^. Lol I'm just making the remakes as I organize my cards in RL so theres a few low levels :3. And nope Im gonna make lots more :3! Im just splitting them up into groups of 10 so the viewers dont get confused. Thanks for the rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 nice, very good 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Cabbage Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 why change one of the exodia cards, they are only there for being in your hand and also doing an ftk. Other cards are fine though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kärë Bëär♥ Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 In exodia decks, it's wiser to add multiples of each piece (except the head since its limited) so by summoning one piece while you have another in your hand your can get another piece possibly completing the set. Or if all you need is the left leg and you onlly have 1 Right leg left and you want the left leg, you can summon this card, get the Left leg, use compulsary evacuation device to return it to your hand and win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Oh look you made more cards :D And thanks for the rep :) Green Ojama should be Ojama Green. Unless you wanted to change the name.Great effect. Discard a 'certain' card to the Graveyard (Ojamagic) It's 2 for 1 deal.But you should also make remakes for the other Ojama's too IMO. 9.8/10 Bokochi now huh? Decent effect. Great way to get Dekochi in your hand and onto the field.Discarding a DARK monster can give you a chance to get out DAD faster as well.I like how the direct damage effect and the battle damage effect work together. 9.6/10 Harpie Lady! Decent effect. Can become a small small beatstick.I like the effect to special another Harpie monster. Decent swarm and the drawback.The drawback being if the summoned monster is removed from the field, it's RFP. 9.6/10 Mystical Shine Ball. I have this card xDLove the HP Gain. It gives a bit of use to the card in the kind of deck it should be in.I like the searching ability you gave it too. Also the small drawback to it too. 9.4/10 Basic Insect. One of the more older cards.I think instead of the equal Level +2 thing just say "Level 4 or lower". Makes more sense.I like the changing of the battle positions. This could serve some justice in a certain deck.If you don't know what I mean,I meant the Spider archetype xP 9.8/10 Hinotama Souls!!!!!Has decent burn damage and swarm and MORE burn damage. In all can burn 1100.Good tribute fodders for card effects I suppose and if I'm not mistaken,Synchro Capabilities.I can see this in some Flamvell decks. Not all, but some-most. 9.8/10 In all. I give the whole collection of remakes so far 9.9/10.I'm waiting for one remake that just makes me say WOW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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