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Mouse Lord of Parvus


rholowie

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Nice card! Just a few minor OCG mistakes I noticed:

- Level 3 instead of LV3

- this isn't really a mistake per se, but when you're talking about Special Summoning the "on your side of the field" part is uneccessary. If you took that out the font might be a little bigger.

- "The Deck is then shuffled" is an outdated phrase. I think it would be "Then shuffle your Deck". I'm not 100% sure though cause I only play Traditional.

- I'm pretty sure Tributing should be capitalized.

Other than those things, its a sweet card.

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