aleos uchiha Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 8)[/img]lore: when this monster battles a monster with higher LV double it's ATK points during damage step only. if it battle with a lower LV monster cut it's ATK points in half.[/img]lore: 1tuner + 1or more warior type monsters.only during your battle phase remove from your grave yard as much monsters as you wish. to raise this monster ATK points by the number of cards removed x1000. when this monster attacks oponent can't activate any cards effects. at the end phase this monster switches into DEF mode and his ATK points returns to 0.[/img]lore: when this card is on field or grave its treated as a normal monster. when resummoned it gains the folowing effect: pay as much you want from you life points to rise this monsters attack. and when its destroyed oponent is damaged as half its attack points when its destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 This pictures need backgrounds the OCG sucks... hard. Read a real Gemini Card's effect an word it like that instead of playing it by ear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 [/img]lore: when this card is on the field or grave yard its treated as a normal monster. when its re summoned it gains the folowing effects: pay any amount from you life points and add it to this monsters attack points. and when this card is destroyed by an oponent's card effect. it enflict damaged equal to half its attack points when it was destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 please guys till me if the cards are good or not :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 I'm sorry, but if I said they were good, I'd have to be lying. A *sarcasm* few corrections:Â - LV = level- cut attack points in half = halve the ATK- Synchro Formula: Tuner / Specific Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters / 1 or more specific non-tuner monsters- Where are you removing the cards from your graveyard? Do you mean remove from play?- Ultimate Rare, Level 12, Divine-Beast, DIVINE all are = or > fail.- X000 = ? (literally, if you're going to do that, either make it have no specific ATK and put ? or put 0)Â Brute Warrior is extremely OP'd. I mean, a level 3 with 3400 ATK? Your second card is also OP, because you can just remove from play something like D.D. Scout Plane then you gain 1000 ATK and also bring out a monster. Also, you even misspelled! I can understand anyone making OCG errors, but not really spelling errors. For example, sowrd? Enflict? 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Work on the cards, and get backgrounds for the pictures, and put them back up, currently they are not ready for a raiting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 these aren't good. 2/10 better luck next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 O... MAH... GAWD... Someone already corrected the OCG... BUT you spelled sword wrong on that sword slasher dude.Pictures need BG.  These are really bad. I mean, I've seen new people's cards before, but I'm sure most of them were either good, or they didn't have good grammar because they weren't english, or some were bad... I don't know, you are new. So I think I will give you a 3/10. Just cause your new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 These cards are absolutely horrible. Yes, you're new, so that covers the OCG problems. But really, the SPELLING? 0/10. If I was your literature teacher, I'd have killed myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 sorry for grammer mistackes but its beacuse english isn't my first languagei will try to make them better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sub-Zero999 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 pretty good exept i have a question... whats X000? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 x000 it raise by a thausand :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 pretty good exept i have a question... whats X000?it means that the monsters attack or defense is equal to something times 1000. example: slifers ATK and Def are equal to the amount of cards in your hand times 1000example the wicked eraser: his ATK and DEF are each equal to the number of cards your opponent controls x 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceydude168 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Pics are so-so. OCG is bad, spelling is bad, effects are original, but don't make sense. C'mon, you can do better than this! :( 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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