Limited Edition KING Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 [align=center]Some vanilla monsters with a back story maybe more to come? =Kaimana, Defender of the Palace= This mermaid comes from a long line of Hawaiian warriors who fought with heart, honour and loyalty until they die in battle. Even though she is a female warrior she can hold her own in battle by piercing through the skulls of her opponents with the spear her father gave to her as an infant. =Kamikaze, King of the Palace= Kamikaze, the king of Hawai`i has defeated many opponents during battle. When he isn't fighting invaders or out conquering the ocean he enjoys spending time with his family and is proud of all his children apparently the one he is most proud of is Kaimana. Grammar maybe a bit off :\ politely fix it if anythings wrong. < C&R >[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 A vanilla i like .. thats a first :L Grammar isn't my best pointGrade B- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Not enough history in the card =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Mhm... like the idea though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Not enough history in the card =/ Der of course it is its a new card I made of course it doesn't have a history. I may make up another one that supports the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Finally a Vanilla Tuner...Stats look balanced.Pic fits it perfectly.I think it's "Atlantean""Even though she's a female warrior, she can hold her own in battle by piercing through her opponents' skulls with the spear her father gave to her as an infant." Sorry I'm such a grammar freak. This is what I get when I have straight 100's in English.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Thats okay if I recall correctly I wanted some grammar fixes ^^ Thanks new card will be added and the old one will be redone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Oh... my... God...Vanillas...Buddy, of all the cards, you chose vanillas?You know how much i HATE vanillas. I think they're just a waste of space if left unsupported.I strongly suggest you give them effects or support. Otherwise, you get 0/10 cause vanillas are the cheapest excuse for a card.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Time for English to kick in! Kamikaze, the king of Hawai`i, has defeated many opponents in battle. When he isn't fighting invaders or conquering the ocean, he spends time with his family. He is proud of all his children, particularly Kaimana. lol Hawai' i...I feel weird doing Grammar fixes instead of OCG.Nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Oh... my... God...Vanillas...Buddy' date=' of all the cards, you chose vanillas?You know how much i HATE vanillas. I think they're just a waste of space if left unsupported.I strongly suggest you give them effects or support. Otherwise, you get 0/10 cause vanillas are the cheapest excuse for a card..[/quote'] Yes I am aware of how much you hate Vanilla's but remember this isn't YOUR card ideas these are mine so no matter what you say I still feel Vanilla's are good cards that can be creative within the descriptions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black★Star Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I live in hawaii :)I like the discreption/story.... Not much else to rate is there.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Oh... my... God...Vanillas...Buddy' date=' of all the cards, you chose vanillas?You know how much i HATE vanillas. I think they're just a waste of space if left unsupported.I strongly suggest you give them effects or support. Otherwise, you get 0/10 cause vanillas are the cheapest excuse for a card..[/quote'] Yes I am aware of how much you hate Vanilla's but remember this isn't YOUR card ideas these are mine so no matter what you say I still feel Vanilla's are good cards that can be creative within the descriptions. technically, it's not an idea without an effect :mrgreen:And hey, Kamikaze? Seriously? Of all the names?You know what kamikaze is right? Japanese suicide pilot crashing into US Navy Ships.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kamikaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Sh*t I wrote Kamikaze? o.o I actually meant to write in Kamehameha... Editing now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Yeah...Kamikaze being king of Hawai' i probably isn't such a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Sh*t I wrote Kamikaze? o.o I actually meant to write in Kamehameha... Editing now... Now going DBZ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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