Squirrel Girl Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 [align=center]Here: Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, destroy all "Blackwing" monster you control (except this card). This card gains 600 ATK and DEF for each card destroyed by this effect. If this cards ATK becomes 2400 due to this cards effect, destroy 1 monster your opponent control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 "Blackwing" monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent control. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can attack the opponent directly. Image from DA RATE/COMMENT[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Issue 1 All blackwings are named after types of wind and air currents.Issue 2 OCG is incorrectIssue 3 Effect is counter productive to blackwing playstyleIssue 4 bad picture 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 counter productive blackwing is counter productive 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 The ocg is not wrong. There isn't anything wrong with the name and the effect is good. And the pic is awesome Nough said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 The ocg is not wrong. There isn't anything wrong with the name and the effect is good. And the pic is awesome Nough said you are aware of the blackwing play style right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Yea but since this card isn't a real card, I dont make the effect BW style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 ah, i see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Ok glad you do ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 yes, i'm alot more understanding than my associate sena. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Ok... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 indeed, o.k, no i'm not. i still don't think it's good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Well all i can say is the OCG is good as far as i saw it. But like the previous posters said it doesn't really meet the BW play style. I mean what BW that you know has an effect to destroy monsters?None.That is why this card is kind of Unrealistic.Balanced, but unrealistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 UPed as hell.The most of the time, Blackwings have the field full of Synchros, if played correctly.This consistently gives you -1 and +0s, and I see no +1s. To get the second effect about the 2400 ATK, you need to have a field full of 5 Blackwings, and tribute one, and then destroy all the other four.Which is an essential -6.Because: Tributing a monster is getting rid of a monster = -1.Summoning a monster from your hand gives your hand one less card, so = -1.Sends the other four to the Graveyard, which removes four cards from your field, giving your field less advantage = -4. -1+-1+-4=-6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I was not trying to do this card to fit the BW play style. I have already said that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 That may be true but what makes a Card Realistic is if it is Good enough to be a Real Card. And this card cannot be one until it matches the BW play style.Just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 "If this cards ATK becomes 2400 due to this cards effect,"that incorrect"destroy 1 monster your opponent control. "No controls"you can destroy 1 "Blackwing" monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent control."No comma after you control and again its opponent controls"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can attack the opponent directly" incorrectWhile this card is face-up on the field, Neither player can Attack Directly would be correct "Issue 1 All blackwings are named after types of wind and air currents." thats a huge point in blackwing card naming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 My ocg is correct. I should know cause I am a good card maker. And I wanted this to be a BW that dont are named after types of wind and air currents So there is nothing wrong with this except that it is a little UPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 "If this cards ATK becomes 2400 due to this cards effect' date='"that incorrect"destroy 1 monster your opponent control. "No controls"you can destroy 1 "Blackwing" monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent control."No comma after you control and again its opponent controls"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can attack the opponent directly" incorrectWhile this card is face-up on the field, Neither player can Attack Directly would be correct "Issue 1 All blackwings are named after types of wind and air currents." thats a huge point in blackwing card naming[/quote'] Firstly, you're wrong.His OCG is correct - except from one small aspect. But you're the one in the wrong, not him. Now, Aqua, you need to learn to be not as defensive towards your cards as you are now. You'll realise this somewhere along the lines, and, to be honest, I like this card, except the pics a bit dodgy. Look, be open to criticism, because it makes you better as a card maker.I mean, look at me now. Hope I helped. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I know I need to be less defensive, but it is just who I am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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