the nightmare set

[aleos uchiha]

[/img]

lore: 1tuner + 1or more non tuner monsters

when this monster attacks a defense position monster it enflicts deffirence damage. and when it battles an attack position monster that monster loses half its attack points.

[/img]

lore:1tuner + 1or more non tuner monsters

you have to remove 2 monster in your grave. in every stand by phase to keep this monster on the field. battle damage to oponent from this card is doubled.

[/img]

lore:1tuner + 1or more non tuner monsters

remove 1 monster from graveyard from play to destroy 1 card on the opponent field this effect can only be used once per turn.each time you use this effect raise this monsters attack by 300 points.when you remove 5 monsters by this effect this card will not be affected by any oponents cards effect.

[/img]

lore:remove all cards from your deck out of the game. and have one of your monster raise its attack by the number of monsters removed x 200. at the end of battle phase destroy that monster and return all your cards that were removed to your deck but you take damage equal to that monsters origenal attack points. this attack cant be stopped by any spell/trap effects.

[/img]

lore: when monster on your field is attacked. destroy the attacking monster and oponent descards all his hand to the graveyard.and he takes damage equal to the number of cards descarded x 400.

[/img]

lore: when this monster is sommoned you can remove 2 lv 4 or lower monsters from your hand from the game. then you can special sommon them after 2 turns to your side of the field. and while these monsters are removed this card cant be destroyed by battle.

please guys help me to make better cards!!?

---

please guys reply and help :(

[Iceydude168]

Great pics, great ideas, however OCG and spelling/grammar/punctuation are horrific. Because you are a new member, I'll slack off a bit, as those cards could have been done by me (not the spelling mistakes though, I've always been a spelling freak;)), a few months ago, when I was also just starting on this site. 6/10 for good effort, and OCG and spelling/grammar are easy to improve on. Keep up the good work, and don't take the poor rating to heart. I know you have some great potential, just work on OCG and mechanics. Good work in all.

---

Whoops! I forgot to add something. Some of those cards are too OP'd (overpowered), keep that in mind and revise the effects a bit, although they are great ideas. If you don't want to destroy the effects, tune down the ATK/DEF stats, they're too high for the powerful effects.

[aleos uchiha]

thanks man and (6/10) is awesome. its maybe the highest rating i got so far :)

[Iceydude168]

6/10 isn't the best I've given (I've given 10/10s to amazing cards that should be real), but it certainly isn't the worst. Once I gave 0/10 to someone whose cards were horrendous, and 0/10 to someone who forgot to post their cards. Keep up the good work!