Zirak Army. Reply and rate

[PenguinZ]

[align=center]Pic credit goes to HP Doom.

I am trying to improve these, so all constructive criticism and and help is appreciated.

 

 

Once per turn you may pay 300 life points and tribute this card to Special Summon one "Zirak Soldier" from you hand or deck to your side of the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase you can switch this card with the top card in your deck, the deck is then shuffled.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Zirak Grunt". Once per turn you may pay 500 life points and tribute this card to Special Summon one "Zirak Warrior" from your hand or deck to your side of the field. For every "Zirak" monster in your hand and graveyard this card gains 1 level. Once per turn you may reduce this cards level to 5 and gain life points equal to the amount of levels reduced x 1000.

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Zirak Soldier". Once per turn you can pay 1000 life points and tribute this card to Special Summon one "Zirak General" from your hand or deck to your side of the field. Once per turn you may activate one the following effects: *Randomly select 5 cards from your deck and graveyard and switch them, the deck is then shuffled. *You may pay 800 life points to destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field with equal or less ATK then this card. *You may pay up to 800 life points to have this card gain ATK equal to the amount of life points you payed. * You may send this card to the graveyard to gain life points equal to this card's original ATK or DEF (you chose).

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Zirak Warrior". Once per turn you can tribute this card and pay 1500 life points to Special Summon one "Zirak Warlord" from your hand or deck to your side of the field. Every turn you lose 100 life points, if not destroy this card. Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects: *Randomly select one monster in your graveyard and remove it from play, this card than gains ATK equal to the monsters level x 100. *You can tribute one "Machine" monster on your side of the field to have this card gain ATK equal to the tributed cards original ATK or DEF (whichever is lower). *For every trap card in your hand this card gains 400 DEF.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Zirak General". Every turn you lose 100 Life Points or destroy this card. Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects: *Pay 3000 Life Points to Special Summon all monsters in your hand and graveyard to the field. *Pay 1000 Life Points to move one monster on your side of the field to the Spell and Trap card zone, the moved monster can still attack. *Tribute one monster on your side of the field to have this card gain ATK equal to how many monsters the tributed monster has destroyed x 500. *Pay 2000 Life Points to search your deck for one "Zirak War God" and special Summon it to your side of the field.[/align]

[NeXodus]

The OCG is almost perfect except... UH-OH, miscapitalizations like Normal Summoned and Set.

 

Good cards. But I didin't read all ofthem :(.

 

8/10 ^^

[PenguinZ]

Normal Summoned is capitalized in all cards I've seen.

 

Thanks for the rate.

[NeXodus]

Zirak Soldier and Warrior's Normal Summoned or Set isn't capitalized.

 

And Zirak Warlord and General's Set isn't capitalized.

[PenguinZ]

Bump.

[PenguinZ]

Bump.

[PenguinZ]

Bump.

[PenguinZ]

Bump.

[PenguinZ]

Bump.

[Alfredbootman]

They're all good. I love the pictures. Some of them may be a little too powerful, though.

[PenguinZ]

Thanks.