legolover09 Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Ooc I was away for forth of July. Also I'm writing this on an iPod touch so I can't tell how many lines it is. If it is too short I shall change it when I get too acomputer. Ic: Eclipse had felt something change within him. Vladimir was telling the truth. He trusted Vladimir more after this. He slowly put his hand on the scroll. Then he remembered who Vladimir was. He had already thrown his lot with him and put his hand on the scroll anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Thorn was breathing heavily and coughing from the thick, black smoke. His communicator had landed next to him, but he still couldn't reach it. It wouldn't be long before he died of blood loss or would go beyond help. He pulled himself forward and grabbed the radio, switching it on. He contacted Leon directly, "Leon.... It's Thorn...I'm not... dead but I ....Will be...soon if.... someone doesn't...help me...." He had to take a breath between each couple of words due to the amount of oxygen his body was using. He put the radio next to him and waited for a reply but then something caught his eye. Raven was flying back to the ship, Wasn't she supposed to be fighting Vlad? he thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 when rnaki heard thorn over the radio immidatly he dive bombed back towords the scorce of the signal."Thorn! where are you!" he yelled as he flew around where that fight had taken place. "Come man where are you!" he yelled worryed. thorn had only done what he did because of rnaki and he wasnt going to let him die if he was still alive. suddley he saw him there in the rubble. he flew down and started to remove the debris off of him."You just refuse to die hey thorn." rnaki tried to joke as he moved some large peices of stone from him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Leon got the transmition, "Raven, Thorn is in your area and still alive! Go back down there and save his Ass!" Leon honestly wanted to go back with all of his heart, but he couldn't risk it, he then prepared the breather as he left the first of three atmospheres.__________________________________________________________ Vladimir smiled, "Do you know Eclipse? Why I gave you that name?" Vladimir then pushed Eclipse's arm into the scroll, then the rest of his body into it, "NOW TRANSFORM!" Eclipse then came back out the bottom in his shadow form, his left eye was red and his pupil was in the shape of a plus sign. His right eye became blue and his pupil was in the shape of a minus sign. "You are now my ultimate weapon Eclipse. I shall summon you to the sun and you shall begin to cover it with your new found powers, go and eclipse the sun, the more eclipsed the sun is, the more powerful I become. I know this is a long process but when you finish in a half hour, the world will be ours for the taking." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Thorn looked up at Rnaki who was lifting heavy ruins in an attempt to save him. "Your wasting your breath....." Thorn sighed, sadly. "It is not your destiny...... to save me it..... is to kill the ultimate evil....Vladimir..." Thorn said interupted by coughing. The coughing stopping and blood was at the corner of his mouth. "Don't bother.... trying to save me..... it isn't long before.......Vladimir will try to......" he slipped in and out of consiousness before blacking out. Blood surrounded his chest from the wound, his legs crushed by the mount of rubble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 "im not leaving you. no one gets left behind ever not with me." rnaki aid as he got rid of the last bit of rubble. he then jumped down to thorn where he pulled out omega shiva."omega shiva heal him to the point where he will survive then send him to raven." rnaki said and as he commanded omega shivas light began to heal thorn. it only made it so he would live though he would need serious medical attation in order to keep living for the rest of his life span. suddly a bright light surroneded thorn and made his disipare and re appare in front of ravenraven help him please. he thought as he once agian flew at valdimer."hey leon you get first attack ok." he said to his friend as he pulled out his sword. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 "Raven?...." Thorn said weakly. "Rnaki sent me here....I need help..." He fell forwards and hit the floor. A puddle of blood surrounded his chest and his legs felt numb. The light seemed bright inside and his eyes hurt and watered becuase of the smoke outside. He coughed again and blood ran out of his mouth and on to the floor. Blood started to poor out of his nose and he needed serious medical attention. "Raven....please..." Thorn whispered. It didn't look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Vladimir then saw as Leon and Rnaki where heading towards him, both wearing breathers, "Ha! Well, looks like the battle has been taken to space! Nice to see you two again! Leon! You've seemed to reach your final form, you look like a dragon-human crossbreed." Leon Flew over towards Vladimir with merciless intent, he slashed at Vlad and Vlad grabbed leons sword using his plasma. "Mystic Eye! FIRE!" Now that Leon has reached his final stage he could use one attack based off each elemental power. A burst of fire came straight from Leon's mouth and burned Vladimir, Vladimir flew back, "Tch, I see this will not be as fun as before!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 "NO IT WONT" rnaki yelled as he flew at vladimir and slashed him across the chest with his sword."Because this time im helping leon and not cowring in a conor." he yelled. "GO THUNDERBLAST!" he yelled sending a large bolt of lightning shaped like a wolf at vlad."this time we're not gonna let you win easly." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Vladimir moved back just enough so that the slash ended up just cutting his chest, "I-see." Vladimir then brought his scroll back out and began to chant something in an odd language, "Tu fui, ego Eris!" he then put his hand into the scroll and puled out a tablet of sorts. "This is the Table of Ju!" it was made of gold and written in four different languages (English, Jupertarian, Ancient Shadow Script, Glyphins) "Now table of Ju, give me your power!" A golden orb appeared around Vladimir, it then shrunk slowly until it compacted itself onto Vladimirs skin, it then sunk into his skin and Vladimir's wings grew to a huge size, his ears grew pointed and he grew a fine tail with short black fur. "This is the end of you!" Vladimir then spat out plasma balls at Rnaki and Leon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Rnaki flew infront of leon and put his hands up."Omega defense!" he yelled putting up a large barrior around the two."your gonna have to do better then that if you want to defeat us." he taungted. he shot of his own barrage of lighting bolts at vlad."eat lightning!" he yelled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Vladimir laughed as Rnaki blocked the plasma balls, Lightning was then shot at him and Vladimir flew out of the way. one however did hit his Tail, "Gah! I need to get used to this thing!" Leon then whispered to Rnaki, "Listen, I just need you to hold him, I will preform my Judgment Spell on him." Leon then climbed the emptiness that was space high above Rnaki and Vladimir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 "fine by me." rnaki said as he flew behind vladimir and grabed him holding him in place. rnaki then wraped tendrals of lightning around vladimir to make sure he wasnt moveing."not used to the tail yet i see. too bad so much you can do with it." rnaki taunted as his teeth grew sharper and he bit into vlads sholder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Vladimir was stuck before he knew it! Unable to move and sharp teeth in his skin, "DAMNIT!" Leon the shouted out, "VLADIMIR!" from a high point above them, "Time to fave your Judgment! Divine judgment!" It was Leon's special move. He began to write letters through the emptiness that was space that spelled JUDGMENT. "NOW LET GOD DECIDE YOUR FATE!" Leon then pointed his sword at Vladimir then the word Guilty was placed on his forehead, it lit on fire, "Rnaki! get out of there!" The fire then began to spread, and Vladimir was burning alive, "I'm not done yet!" Eclipse was covering more and more of the sun, the guilty faded, as the sun became 1/4 eclipsed, Vladimir grew fur and his muscles bulged out and ruined his suit. His eyes became bright yellow. "Leon, welcome to DIE!!!!!!!!!!" Vladimir shot out a huge blast of plasma that knocked Leon right over and free falling through space, he eventually got back up, but he was hurting badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Rnaki was forced to let go by vladmir changing. he flew back to leon who was now hurt."you ok man." he asked as he put a large sheild around them protecting them."he just gets stronger everytime we throw something at him what do we do." he asked wondering how in the world they were going to beat him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 "I-i'm okay," Rnaki was right, each second Vladimir was getting stronger, "We can't stop eclipse if we get close enough to fire something at him we'd still burn up, We have to end this before Eclipse finishes the sun, I know it's name because I heard Vladimir say something about it. Listen, in order to defeat him we have to combine our swords and then stab him through the heart. That will end his life. But it shall be difficult." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 OOC wow sounds gay.IC: "well i still have omega shiva we can use that to combined the swords and then you can go after eclispe and i'll take out vladimir." rnaki said as he pulled out omega shiva and it glowed defintaly at vladimir."i wont back down to him or my destiny." he said with a smiled he knew it was his job to finish off vladimir and if he didnt then he would let down raven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Eclipse was at the sun. He was putting it out. It was already more than halfway blocked. Eclipse wondered about Vladimir. Should he stop putting out the sun. No. He would help Vladimir whatever the cost. He helped him and now he would help Vladimir. If Vladimir was to be stopped it wouldn't be by his hand. He wasn't sure who to trust. He wasn't sure. Vladimir was getting more powerful by the second. Eclipse could feel that his own strength was more powerful ever since the Equalizer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 5, 2010 Report Share Posted July 5, 2010 Raven had heard Leons message and was on her way out to find Thorn. However, she had a feeling that it would be best if she had stayed on the ship. And a god witch always follows her instincts. As were the words of her master. Seconsds later Thorn was right infront of her, and she heard Rnaki's voice in her head. Her heart raced just hearing his voice. She quickly pushed it from her head and focused on Thorn. "Hold on friend. I'll take care of you." Raven move her arms so the hovered over his chest. "Nayru's Love: first aid.= a green light encased Thorn and soon his wounds were healed. Raven smiled. "at least I was able to help out a bit." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Leon Took Rnaki's Sword and Combined it with his, It became the Ultimate Weapon so to speak, "Now try and get this through his heart, I will go and stall Eclipse for as long as I can, I can't get close enough to kill him though, without destroying the sun that is." Leon then flew off towards Eclipse. Vlad saw the whole thing, "YOu think THAT can stop me!?" His voice became dark and scary, and scratchy at that! "Die Mortal!" Vlad flew up towards Rnaki and his new found Claws began to Slash at him. "Die!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 rnaki didnt have enough time to dodge the claws and was hurt pretty badly. he tryed to move away but vladimir just attacked him even more. suddly vladimir struck him in the head and Rnaki began to fall. at frist he tryed to fight the fall but he just couldnt muster enough strenght to do it. (this song goes here and keeps playign till the end of the post.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ey_nA0hKzHw keep replaying the slow part untill i say otherwise cause it ruins the mood if you dont.)as he fell he tryed not to cry as he thought of all the people he was letting down. it wasnt untill he thought of the last person he cryed."raven." he wispared. im sorry raven but i dont think i'll be able to keep my promise. he thought as he fell.that was it he couldnt go on he had no strength left to. suddly he heard the sound of a baby crying three babys to be exact. he closed his eyes and like a moive something flashed there.he heard voices and laughter they were calling him. "rnaki...rnaki come on rnaki yoou cant let us down." the voices said. "come on dad you can win for us cant you." they said as he saw the immige of his children but older. then a weomen steped in to the immige at frist he tought it was lightning but then her face came into view. it was raven and she was holding another child."please come back to me rnaki." she said.(now for the faster part.)as she did rnakis eyes snaped open and he suddly found the strenght to move once agian. he pulled up and soared into the sky at high speeds."I wont lose!" he yelled as he summoned up a large storm that traped vladimir. lightning and wind flew at high speeds attacking vladimir with all their might."Omega MAlTROM!" he yelled as the storm picked up in pace lightning now complety covered vladimir and the wind made a tornado that wouldnt let up its grip. "For leon, thorn, xeon and puu, for my three children and all the gyspes who have died. for lightning and for RAVEN I will end you." he said as he flew stright at vladirmir and stabed the sword though him. he didnt know if he hit the heart or not but right after he did his strenght vanished and he fell once more but this time he wasnt recovering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 "Wh-what!?!?! NO! NO DAMNIT NO!!!!!" Vladimir then began to designate, it started at his chest then rew to the rest of the body, "NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU LEON! DAMN YOU RNAKI! YOU SON OF A MOTHER F***ING B*TCH!" his legs were almost gone and his hands were almost gone, his eye was the last thing to go, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Vladimir was gone, All of Eclipses' powers had vanished completly and he was forced away from the sun after Vlad's death, for his power could no longer supply the energy Eclipse needed to cover the Sun. Leon then Saw Vladimir die but no Rnaki, "R-Rnaki?" OOC: Everyone now post your final like two or three posts then I will post the Epilogue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Eclipse realized that Vladimir died as he was almost done putting out the sun. He stopped and came back to his normal size. He landed down next to Leon. With his powers he wasn't noticed and changed himself into Leon's shadow. Eclipse knew he had chosen the wrong side and was glad Vladimir died. He now promised himself to one goal. Using his powers he would remain undetected and protect Leon. A private unkown bodygaurd. He didn't know when he would stop. He would protect Leon because he thought he was the one who helped the most in killing Vladimir... and he didn't know what else to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Raven had been pacing the room she was in for a while now. Something was eating away at her, and she had a bad feeling that it had something to do with Rnaki. It was then that she heard Rnakis voice saying he wouldn't be able to keep his promise. "Dammit, I will not let you die! Xeon keep an eye on Thorn!" Raven didn't give Xeon a chance to reply, and was off towards the battle field, this time she remembered her spell. When she got there she say Rnaki delivering the final blow to Vladimir. A smile reached her face but it quickly fell when he didn't stop himself from falling. "Rnaki!!" Faster than she could ever realize she was under himtrying to slow his fall. The only problem was that he was much heavier than her. Slowly she was able to slow their fall but when they hit the ground, Raven made sure to be on the bottom to take the brunt of the fall. "H-hey....Y-youre freaking....H-heavy." Raven joked trying to hide the pain in her back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 As the two fell there going faster to the ground omega shiva fell out of rnakis pocket. as it fell next to them it glowed brilent rainbow colors and played a beautiful song.as it did rnaki slowly woke up his eyes back to there normal cool gray. as they fell he slowly opened his wings making them glide for a second."im sorry raven i almost didnt keep my promise." rnaki said weakly as they glided along. he grunted in pain for a second as they did but he tryed to keep smiling for her."it seems like im just not strong enough to fly right now im sorry." he said. he looked at omega shiva which was still floating along next to them and let out a pain laugh. "well at least we know omega shiva will protect us for the most part" he said hoping raven wasnt to mad at him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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