karldark Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Level 9[Warrior/synchro/effect]1 "Quickdraw synchron" + 2 or more non-tuner monstersedited text: Send one Synchro Monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon the non-Tuner Synchro Material Monster used to Summon that monster. Draw a card. 3200/1400 this is my first attempt to make a realistic card. I can already see some things that ought to be fixed, but i wanted to see what you guys had to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Horribly overpowered.Bad ocg. However, all is to be expected from a new member.Seeing as how you're new, this ACTUALLY isn't too far off Par. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karldark Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Horribly overpowered.Bad ocg. However' date=' all is to be expected from a new member.Seeing as how you're new, this ACTUALLY isn't too far off Par.[/quote'] what do you mean by "bad ocg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Coaster Guy Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Horribly overpowered.Bad ocg. However' date=' all is to be expected from a new member.Seeing as how you're new, this ACTUALLY isn't too far off Par.[/quote'] what do you mean by "bad ocg? OCG= Oficcial Card Grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karldark Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Horribly overpowered.Bad ocg. However' date=' all is to be expected from a new member.Seeing as how you're new, this ACTUALLY isn't too far off Par.[/quote'] what do you mean by "bad ocg? OCG= Oficcial Card Grammarhahahaha... ok... but that doesn't entirely answer my question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 dont bump within 24 hours. OCG: official Card grammar. How you word the effect, like how things are capitalized, and such.7.5/10keep working on it. This card is Overpowered, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaia Overload Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Official Card Grammer is the EXACT text on a real card. It has to have all the right words, commas, quotations, periods, capitalization, and parenthases. On to business, Ignoring the capitalization errors and things, I think this card is perfectly balanced. Good perpose, Emergency recall. (Not a card.) I could use this if my Nitro Warrior was going to be destroyed, and you draw a card. 9/10. Although, if you would like to go into the Capitalization errors, you CAN look at this. BOLD = Changes. Send one Synchro Monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon the non-Tuner Synchro Material monster used to Summon that monster. Draw a card. On the card it says "and 2 or more non-Tuner monsters." and needs to be a +. I take this lightly because your new. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karldark Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Official Card Grammer is the EXACT text on a real card. It has to have all the right words' date=' commas, quotations, periods, capitalization, and parenthases. On to business, Ignoring the capitalization errors and things, I think this card is perfectly balanced. Good perpose, Emergency recall. (Not a card.) I could use this if my Nitro Warrior was going to be destroyed, and you draw a card. 9/10. Although, if you would like to go into the Capitalization errors, you CAN look at this. BOLD = Changes. Send one Synchro Monster you control to your Extra Deck to Special Summon the non-Tuner Synchro Material monster used to Summon that monster. Draw a card. On the card it says "and 2 or more non-Tuner monsters." and needs to be a +. I take this lightly because your new. =)thank you for adding to the discussion. It's so hard to find people willing to give actual advice rather than be vague or offer nothing at all other than the placate their own egos. thanks for the grammar fixes. I've never been good about capitalization or punctuation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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