LoneDrifter21 Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 My second 2 cards. Im hoping too include these in a set im making. and this one. plz leve comments.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
823=chan Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I get a creepy feeling... :shock::D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoneDrifter21 Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 lol yeah there cards based on terror and fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Okay 1st Card doesn't seem to have a problem the text is Good, the ATK and DEF are good but please don't make fake types in the Future it really annoys people. Now the Second Card here is an OCF fix: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Dread Lord" or 1 "Servant" monster from your Deck or hand to your side of the field. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can destroy 1 face down Spell or Trap CArd on your opponent's side of the field. Now i don't know if by 'Servant" you meant a card with Servant in its name or a Card with Servant as its Monster Type but i wrote it as a Card with Servant in its name. Anyway again like i said on your first card, nice job for a New Member this one seems like a nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoneDrifter21 Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 again, thx for your input when I make the set I'll try to change it and take into account what you said:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Okay no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 The cards are good except the pics. 2nd card have ocg errors but that is fixed by Light Master. Change the ocg for 2nd and the pics on both, then I give them 8/10 now they get 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yus4eel Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 change your subtypes to Zombie or Fiend fake subtypes suck.i know cuz everything i made used to have fake subtypes lol7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoneDrifter21 Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 thx for help try to include in my set everything u suggested Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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