[M.D.] Goetia Dantalon (A Double Tuned Synchro)

[Max Darkness]

DARK Dragon support that can protect itself and other dragons by removing DARK monsters from your Graveyard. Can also remove monsters to inflict damage to your opponent or power itself up. However, when it's removed from the field, you can take a large amount of damage if you used its effect a lot.

 

As for the name, "Goetia" is part of the name of one of the lists of demons made in the 16th century and "Dantalon" is one of the demons mentioned within it.

 

Enjoy.

 

 

Effect: 2 "Goetia" Tuners + 1 or more DARK non-Tuner monsters

If this card is Special Summoned, except by Synchro Summon, during each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard or destroy this card. This card is also treated as a FIRE Beast-Type monster. When this card battles, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to have this card gain 800 ATK, until the End Phase. When your opponent activates a card effect, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to inflict 800 damage to your opponent. If a DARK Dragon-Type monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove from play 1 of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card to negate the effect. When this card is removed from the field, take damage equal to the number of your removed from play DARK monsters x 400.

[Lexadin]

Name is good.

OCG: I don't think the " , " before "except" is needed, the rest looks good.

It's power is also it ballance.

Pic is great, DA?

I like it, a 9.8/10

[Max Darkness]

I seem to use that comma. I think it breaks the effect up and makes it flow better. And the picture is Deviantart.

 

Any other comments?

[Max Darkness]

Bump.