Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Thanks, Yankee! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 I'll cut straight to the chase. Vanessa:-Picture: 7/10 (meh, not my type)-Effect: 8/10 (not bad, but nothing brutally revolutionary either)-Balance: 8/10 (generally ok... she can get pretty dangerous later... maybe decrease her base stats a bit? To like, 1500-1500 or something)-Originality: 9/10 (not bad at all)-OCG: 9.5/10 (Replace 'can' with 'may', and change 'Then shuffle your Deck' to 'Shuffle your Deck afterwards'. I'm not sure if your style is wrong though) Aurore:-Picture: 9/10 (nii~ce =/)-Effect: 8/10 (again, nothing of great interest)-Balance: 9/10 (balanced, that says all)-Originality: 8.5/10 (good)-OCG: 7/10 (the effect is worded wrongly. It sounds like she can attack twice in a row after the first attack, which I assume is wrong. Anyway, even if you wanted to say that, it's still wrongly worded) May:-Picture: 8.5/10 (not very bad, not particularly great either)-Effect: 8.5/10 (decent)-Balance: 7.5/10 (eh, until your next Main Phase? Until the End Phase is enough...)-Originality: 8.5/10 (nothing much to be said, especially since she belongs to a whole Set. Dragons aren't particularly original, but you chose an interesting theme)-OCG: 10/10 (flawless, I think) Olivia:-Picture: 7.5/10 (wtf, isn't she cold... anyway, not bad I guess)-Effect: 9/10 (better than the previous ones)-Balance: 9/10 (it's balanced, generally)-Originality: 9/10 (a rather original idea)-OCG: 8/10 (you screwed up the last sentence - it's supposed to be "...cannot attack until the End Phase of the second turn after activation") Cyline:-Picture: 9/10 (not bad)-Effect: 8.5/10 (nothing revolutionary, nothing bad)-Balance: 8/10 (a bit underpowered, could use a buff in attack and / or defense)-Originality: 8/10 (it's fine.)-OCG: 9.5/10 (made a ' into a ; - yes, I can be a prick. Other than that, excellent) Erika:-Picture: 7.5/10 (eh, don't really like the effect... it would be better without it)-Effect: 9/10 (it has a good and usable effect)-Balance: 9/10 (balanced, could be a tad bit overpowered under circumstances)-Originality: 9/10 (pretty original)-OCG: 8/10 (eh, I have a feeling you messed up the first part of the effect... and I think the second one's got too many 'destroy's, lol. Anyway, not really bad, but still) Annalise:-Picture: 6/10 (it's the only picture in your set that I bluntly... don't like)-Effect: 7/10 (eh, couldn't you have picked something better than another piercing effect... or at least, something on top of that?)-Balance: 8/10 (1800 + piercing is perhaps too much, since 1900 + piercing results in switching to def mode with 0 defense... make it 1700 or something)-Originality: 7/10 (eh, I couldn't find anything particularly original about that card... from the name to the effect, it's too... conventional)-OCG: 10/10 (it's fine, it's just a piercing effect anyway) Dragoness Summoning:-Picture: 9/10 (there's a good picture)-Effect: 8.5/10 (not bad, it could include your hand as an option to summon from - most of these cards do)-Balance: 9.5/10 (it's pretty much balanced, maybe a tad bit underpowered? Not sure)-Originality: 8/10 (eh, it's fine I guess. Nothing too original, but still)-OCG: 9/10 (no need to say 'original' before ATK, if you summon something from your deck, how can it's current ATK not be its original?) Dragon's Full Salvo:-Picture: 9.5 (great)-Effect: 9.5 (liked it)-Balance: 9.5 (it's balanced, I believe)-Originality: 9.5 (especially liked the name - unless 'Salvo' is some horribly misspelled word >_>)-OCG: 8/10 (eh, you kinda messed it up a bit, but it's the last card and I'm too tired to figure out what...) ^ Ixigo's professional grading. All your card games are belong to us. I'm too tired and bored to make averages, do them yourself if you're interested. Anyway, I judged them pretty justly, I think - I liked the Set idea, but I generally hate Dragons as an idea overall (god they are so abused), so I may have been a little bit biased. Good job anyway, this was a great set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 o.o Wow. All innocence has been stripped from my eyes. Thank you for that. And yes, you are getting a rep for spotting the ";" . I got a guilty feeling every time I looked and no one noticed. Yes, I know Dragons are abused but at least the pictures are original. Thank you for rating and taking such time to explain just why you rated that way. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Dragons are abused to much? Dang, than I am not really that good, I need to find a new thing =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 No, no! You're making Sea Serpents, there is a subtle yet refreshing difference... /edit: In response to your comment, Yankee....yay! But I will make those last 3 posts updates, not spam! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Well, I like to make dragons. They are my favorites. So, I guess I need a new fave so I can stay away from making cards that are abused, Hey, cyber, you are 4 away from being a 5 star!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Here we go, Yankee. As promised, my last two posts will be updates only. I have changed the effects and the grammar, and added a new card. *BUMP* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Yes they totally pass, great everything 10/10 You go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Update. There we are, Yankee. ^^ I'm a 5 Star Member now. :3 (*****) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Whoooo!!! Hoooo!!! Nice job cyber! now you have to hav a sacrafice to be played! whoo!!!!!!!!!lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Images and cards updated! *BUMP!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Oh, yeah, I know you re-did the card i reviewed, it's, well, maybe .1 better now. I still love it. I REALLY love it, I mean, the first A-. Whoot! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theallpowerfulme Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 These are great! Only one thing: on May, the Dragoness Tamer and Dragon's Spike Agression you mention "until your next Main Phase". Do you mean that if you activate the effect during your Main Phase 1, the effect lasts until your Main Phase 2, and if it is activated during Main Phase 2 it lasts throughout your opponent's turn until your next Main Phase 1? If not, perhaps "until your next Standby Phase" would be more appropriate.As i said, these are excellent, so 10/10 (first one i've ever given if i'm not mistaken) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 100/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 After I made Vanessa' date=' the Dragoness Champion[/url'] , I liked her so much that I had to make a whole Set! Please be honest about the cards (do they pass or fail?) but also remember that this Set will also have some Dragon support. This is my first time making "Dragon-related" cards, so if you have any suggestions or helpful comments I am all ears. Thanks! Full credit goes to DJ-Osiris, who is responsible for all the Holographic Effects. Thanks! And enjoy your well-deserved + Rep! ~**New**~ Ghost Rare (at least, I think it is >.<) --- Also, pictures and effects are appreciated, since (as you can imagine) it's rather difficult and challenging to find fitting Female Dragon/Knight/Mage/Warrior pictures. If you PM me some good images, and I choose to use them, you will receive a + Reputation point from me with best wishes. Let's all help each other, and thanks!You should call it Holo Rare or Holo Background Rare10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Thanks everybody! And thanks, All Powerful, I wasn't thinking of Main Phase 2 when I wrote those effects. :3 Thanks, again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesktopTemple Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 39/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Please rate the Thread guys...I'm still suffering from an anonymous low rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 *BUMP!!!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Well, basically I'm posting here to figure out whether or not you are getting my PMs... but it'd be spam, I might as well point out that by "next Main Phase" you automatically refer to "next Main Phase 1", unless you specify the "2". At least, I'm 96% certain of that... Anyway, will we see more Dragoness cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 I am getting your pms (I'm glad you didn't post them here :3) and thanks, I will correct that. And yes, I sure hope so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Very good, 10/10. They're very well done. Good effects, nice pictures. I really like the holo effect on some of the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Thanks, but I can't take credit for those Holos. And unlike everyone else, you actually like them! Yay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Wait, wha? I LOVE holo stuff, I have asked dJ Osiris alot for holoing, it's cool.So, any new ideas coming? And this is like your shpinxes, and Valkries, and lady samari's huh? This is your new set ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Oh, you checked out my Sphinxes? I'm flattered although they are terrible. I was brand-new, so what can you expect? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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