Onslaught, the Ultimate Psychokinetic Being

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Yes teh card name is very long.

 

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[spoiler=Lore]1 Psychic-Type Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all Non-Psychic-Type monsters on the field. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 800 Life Points and send 1 Psychic-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, gain Life Points equal to the level of the destroyed monster x200. If this card is removed from the field, you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Psychic-Type monster from your Graveyard except "Onslaught, the Ultimate Psychokinetic Being".

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[Yang Xiao-Long]

Instead of "as a result of battle", you can just put "by battle"

 

Pic fits the card (is that Marvel?)

That is a VERY long name xD

I like the entire card overall.

10/10

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Thank you every much. And yes, the character is Onslaught from Marvel. :)

[Beankyu]

Well, I like lORE.

Thanks a lot for ur sharing.

I'm searching for ir more.

[touzaikokon]

1 Psychic-Type Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all Non-Psychic-Type monsters on the field. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 800 Life Points and send 1 Psychic-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, gain Life Points equal to the level of the destroyed monster x200. If this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 Psychic-Type monster from your Graveyard except "Onslaught, the Ultimate Psychokinetic Being".[/quote']

 

Effect: Fits rather well for Psychics. I'd play this card. (3 points).

 

Grammar: "as a result of battle" can just be "by battle." Besides that, no problems. (2 points).

 

Style: Looks cool, and the name is pretty epic. (3 points).

 

 

Overall: 8/10

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

I'll change the "result of battle" part. Thanks for the input everyone!

[Card_Critic24]

I like the card, but the only thing I hate is the pic. Not be all strict, but ALL Psychics have either Green, White, or Yellow in their picture. So -3 on pic. 7/10

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Thanks for commenting.

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

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[Giga Hand]

Psychic Synchros usually heal life points... I can't name one that doesn't. Points for that.

 

Difficult to overcome, but still conceivable. Compulsory Evacuation Device, Dimensional Prison, etc. all do the job without triggering its protection effect. But the effect that activates when it's overcome is overpowered, especially given its protection effect, I'd put a hefty life point cost on it. At least 1500.

 

I would love to see a card like this in the game, 7/10

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Fixed.

[snyperfox2003]

hellz yea! now this is a card i love to posess but think the cost effect should be boosted if its protecting him.

9/10 overall

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Thanks! :)