Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 [align=center]I'm not used to making Realistic Cards, so here goes nothing. If you can't read that effect, maybe get some glasses.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Dizzy's in Realistic? *GASP*Just put "Psychic-Type and LIGHT monsters" Nice way to damage your opponent. Me like.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Dizzy's in Realistic? *GASP*Just put "Psychic-Type and LIGHT monsters" Nice way to damage your opponent. Me like.9/10 This was good o.O I mean, it'll fit nicely in Psychic Decks, but I thought the OCG was atrocious. (I'm used to spamming in clubs) I'll make that edit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Effect: My first question is are you sending all the monsters from the field, hand, Deck, or a combination of all three? The second thing I ask is why do you draw the 2 cards if you're going to dump them immediately? Shouldn't you just mill? The effect is okay, but I'm just curious. (1 point). Grammar: It could use considerable rewording. I'm not sure about some parts of your effect, so I interpreted a bit. Those parts are in brackets.Here's my fix: "Send all Psychic-Type and LIGHT monsters [on the field/in either player's hand/in either player's Deck] to the Graveyard. During your next Draw Phase, send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 100. You cannot declare an attack next turn." A lot of your wording could (should) be updated. (1 point). Style: Card looks pretty awesome. I have a pet peeve for lack of set numbers, though. You should add some. (2 points). Overall: 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Effect: My first question is are you sending all the monsters from the field' date=' hand, Deck, or a combination of all three? The second thing I ask is why do you draw the 2 cards if you're going to dump them immediately? Shouldn't you just mill? The effect is okay, but I'm just curious. (1 point). [b']Grammar[/b]: It could use considerable rewording. I'm not sure about some parts of your effect, so I interpreted a bit. Those parts are in brackets.Here's my fix: "Send all Psychic-Type and LIGHT monsters [on the field/in either player's hand/in either player's Deck] to the Graveyard. During your next Draw Phase, send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 100. You cannot declare an attack next turn." A lot of your wording could (should) be updated. (1 point). Style: Card looks pretty awesome. I have a pet peeve for lack of set numbers, though. You should add some. (2 points). Overall: 4/10 Just the field... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Attack Phase should be Battle Phase, other than that it is a good card 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Attack Phase should be Battle Phase. You sure? Hmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Yea i'm sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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