Getharon, Protecter of the Far North

[DragonIncarnate]

 

"Getharon, Protecter of the Far North" is a Secret Rare Dragon-type WIND Attribute Synchro monster with 2700 ATK and 800 DEF.

Effect: 1 Dragon-type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is synchro summoned successfully, return all spell and trap cards to their owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return one Dragon-type monster to their owner's deck.

Let me know if you think this card is too broken or wheter it is just fine because I am trying to make a yugioh set.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

OCG:

"When this card is Synchro Summoned, return all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to their respective owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 Dragon-Type monster to its owner's Deck."

 

Maybe change the returning of cards from your hand to back to your Deck? As for the other effect, you need to specify what Level the monster is, and from where you're returning it.

 

Pic is overused, but you couldn't know, since you're new.

Since you're new, 6/10

[touzaikokon]

1 Dragon-type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is synchro summoned successfully' date=' return all spell and trap cards to their owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return one Dragon-type monster to their owner's deck.[/quote']

 

Effect: It's pretty good. Not super creative, but hey, it's pretty solid. Returning a Dragon is interesting, I guess the idea is to bounce this card back and Synchro for it again...or something. The only thing is that I'd make this card a higher level, otherwise people will Debris the s*** out of this card. (2 points).

 

Grammar: You're new, but you were fairly spot on. Here's my fix:

 

"1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, return all Spell and Trap Cards to their owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 Dragon-Type monster to its owner's Deck."

 

Again, not bad. (2 points).

 

Style: It looks cool, not going to lie. I like it a lot, although next time, watch out for silver lettering on Synchros. It's just a mess. (2 points).

 

 

Overall: 6/10

[DragonIncarnate]

OCG:

"When this card is Synchro Summoned, return all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to their respective owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 Dragon-Type monster to its owner's Deck."

 

Maybe change the returning of cards from your hand to back to your Deck? As for the other effect, you need to specify what Level the monster is, and from where you're returning it.

 

Thank you, and it was supposed to be return the Spell and Trap cards on the field back to the hand because I thought putting them back to the deck would be too powerful. I also meant for the secondary effect to target Dragons on the field.

 

Effect: It's pretty good. Not super creative, but hey, it's pretty solid. Returning a Dragon is interesting, I guess the idea is to bounce this card back and Synchro for it again...or something. The only thing is that I'd make this card a higher level, otherwise people will Debris the s*** out of this card. (2 points).

 

Thank you. Yea you would be right about Debris Dragon being abused, so I am going to change the card to a level 8.

 

 

Here is the new version. Effect: When this card is Synchro Summoned, return all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to their respective owner's hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 Dragon-Type monster on the field to its owner's Deck.

Thanks for the help dchi and ~SJ1~.

[yus4eel]

i dont know about the pic being overused i havent seen that particular one very often