snow_wolfyII Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 This is my first booster!Credit to deviantart 4 the pics Please Rate it (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Nice cards, but you double-posted Volcano Pheonix. I believe that a good 8/10 is in order. In Volcano Pheonix, you have 2 "d"s in "targeted". 3 of your Mouse monters have the same effect (seems kind of unoriginal) When you make tokens, you should have this format: (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 0) A few minor capitalization errors. All in all, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doommoose Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 The mouse monsters are really crappy... no one would use them. :lIt would be close-to impossible to summon phoenix, since he is level 8 and he requires you to use a level 3 non-tuner as your only non-tuner... so he would need a level 5 tuner. :lA lot of OCG errors.A lot of Misspelled words. Oddly enough because you doubled on a lot of letters like you were trying to talk like a cartoon snake or something...4/10 for effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Two words for level 5 Tuner monster: Quickdraw Synchron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 Thanks for the feedback! I haven't played for a while so OCG grammar may not be so good (^_^). Ciao! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 You still have Volcano Pheonix double-posted... Anyways, if you want me to fix up all of your card's effects, then PM me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 These cards are pretty good these mouse cards would do well in a remove from play deck and there not to over powered the only problem I see is a few spelling error's and it will be nearly impossible to get volcano Phoenix out on the field unless you have a quick draw syncron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 They are not bad but not that good either. There are a lot of OCG errors and it is almost impossible to get ''Volcano Pheonix'' on the field. But all in all if you fix those things, you got some pretty good cards cause they're not OP'd. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Bump just for you 'cause I'm nice that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted September 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Uhh... what's a bump again? Sorry about the mispelled words. The cards took me a while to do but i keep on missing the spelling areas. PS: does anyone know how to get those ' my colour is green' and stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 If this is your first try, I'll give you a 7.5/10 but if it's like a 2nd or more, I would down grade it to 6. The pictures are great, not really op but there's few misspell but I don't really like to judge since I'm new to. Anyway, check out my structure deck Inferno.Clan Burn Deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
momobeast Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 awesome pics id give it a 8/10 because you need some spelling check other then that pretty awesome oh and ps;could you tell me how to post i got a whole deck beast empire with 44 cards i just need to know how to post thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Ya, sure just make them all part of the same set, and then keep on 'uploading to image shack', and then just copy and paste the tingy for each card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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