The Final Horseman Set (My first set :D)

[GoldenRook]

[spoiler=First Horseman - Conquest]

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[spoiler=Forth Horseman - Death]

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[spoiler=Final Horseman - Apocalypse]

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[spoiler=Effect Text:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from your hand while "Forth Horseman - Death" is on the field or in your Graveyard. Pay half your Life Points and Special Summon this card. This card gains 300 ATK for each Monster Card in your Graveyard. You can remove from play one card in the Graveyard so this card can attack again.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Possible Strategy] When used in an offensive-type deck with a few cards to help with deck destruction, these cards could potentially raise the desk effectiveness if used right. The first I basically meant to send more cards to the graveyard. The second is to call out as much battle as possible it would be a good chance to place traps like "mirror force" or "drain shield". The third is to make sure you opponent loses as much cards as possible so it make the effect of the forth card even more devastating. Not only that but you would get a head start in the damage too. Finally you can get around to summoning the final horseman and hopefully by then he would have high ATK and DEF do to cards in the grave.(Beware of premature summoning!) It's other effect would just let you lay waste to your opponents Life Points.

 

 

 

I believe I corrected most if not OCG mistakes. Do tell me if you see any.

[TableCloth358]

draw phase = Draw Phase - When talking about a Phase, such as Draw Phase or Battle Phase, you need to Cap the first letters.

deck = Deck

graveyard = Graveyard

attack position = Attack Position

lifepoints = Life Points

can't = cannot

special summon = Special Summon - All types of Summoning, like Normal or Special Summon, are caped

 

I could retype all your OCG but then you wouldn't learn much. So here is the link to the OCG thread http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html it'll help you. now, this "Archtype" thing is okay... It has it's up's and Down's i really don't see much use for these cards but there really good for a new kid. So i'm going to say 7/10 good job keep up the work

[SirtyStan]

I must say... For a first set, I'm impressed.

 

draw phase = Draw Phase - When talking about a Phase' date=' such as Draw Phase or Battle Phase, you need to Cap the first letters.

deck = Deck

graveyard = Graveyard

attack position = Attack Position

lifepoints = Life Points

can't = cannot

special summon = Special Summon - All types of Summoning, like Normal or Special Summon, are caped

 

I could retype all your OCG but then you wouldn't learn much. So here is the link to the OCG thread http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html it'll help you. now, this "Archtype" thing is okay... It has it's up's and Down's i really don't see much use for these cards but there really good for a new kid. So i'm going to say 7/10 good job keep up the work

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He has that exactly right. Anyways, I have one thin to say, though: By the text on the card, you can just Normal Summon or Set "Final Horseman: Apocalypse" with two tributes. If you don't want that, add "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set." at the beginning of its effect.

 

Anyways, for a rookie, here's how I'll rate your cards:

 

Originality: 1.5/2 (Because the "FINAL" cards have similar effects)

OCG: 1.5/2 (Some minor errors)

Name: 2/2 (In most cards, though, thy have a dash instead of a colin, especially archtypes, like "Blackwing - Shura the Blue Flame")

Other things (Code, Creator, Date): 1.5/2 (Remember to put what set/deck/booster pack it came from, an the number)

Pictures: 2/2 (really great pictures!)

 

+1 for the first set you've ever created!

 

Total: A whopping 9.5/10! This is my highest rating ever!!!!

[GoldenRook]

Lol I'm honored :D

[TableCloth358]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

don't forget tot cheak the OCG thread

[GoldenRook]

Lol I'm honored :D

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

don't forget tot cheak the OCG thread

 

Yeah yeah I know Jeez :P

[SirtyStan]

Lolz. This'll soon be like a personal chat room, because we're all on ^^

 

It'll be eventually put into the spam section if we don't stop :/