General Assclown Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Okay, followed a tut from GimpKnowHow on Youtube. Peoplez haz said I needed one ._. Anyway, CnC pl0x. And don't mention text, it was there for .... insurance, I suppose >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 The effects around the render look LQ and wrongly faded. There is no depth, lighting or real flow. Not bad for a beginner though.. Keep reading tutorials on places like deviant art and such and you will get better over time. Keep it up mate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 In addition there's a lot of empty space (The left and right occupied by only black), which isn't necessarily good. Keep at it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Good colour scheme. But the sharp colours to the sides and the blend over the focal seem off.The text to the side could use a little improvement. I like the outcome though. Pretty sweet Assassins Creed tag. Just keep up the practice and you'll be smacking all the discriminators in the face with a wet fish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 the text absolutely destroys any chance of improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 The effects around the render look LQ and wrongly faded. There is no depth' date=' lighting or real flow. Not bad for a beginner though.. Keep reading tutorials on places like deviant art and such and you will get better over time. Keep it up mate :)[/quote'] Tanx chu :D In addition there's a lot of empty space (The left and right occupied by only black)' date=' which isn't necessarily good. Keep at it though.[/quote'] I thought that the black corners would help add flow. But um, I was told by EHK that it makes the background look like Earth so yeah .... I'll keep that noted. Good colour scheme. But the sharp colours to the sides and the blend over the focal seem off.The text to the side could use a little improvement. I like the outcome though. Pretty sweet Assassins Creed tag. Just keep up the practice and you'll be smacking all the discriminators in the face with a wet fish. Thanks for the support. Also' date=' I recognize your username .... from somewhere >.> the text absolutely destroys any chance of improvement. [spoiler=OBJECTION!]And don't mention text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 If you didn't want text mentioned, you should add a version without text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 If you didn't want text mentioned' date=' you should add a version without text.[/quote'] Well ... meh. If you want, I could do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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