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Warrier of light set


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Koolie, gonna try the rating thing...your the first to be rated by me...^_^....koolie...

 

Playability: 9.5/10

Creativity: 9/10

Art: 7/10 (Light Madden, which I think you were going for light maiden, was screwed up and light ball and warior of light's rebirth are kinda bland)

 

Overall rating, 8.5...^_^...sorry if I seemed harsh...

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Frunk's Rating: The Original Rating = The Rating Unlike Danilus' :lol: :twisted:

Creativity: 9.5

Understandable: 8.5 (A few spelling and grammer mistakes, I'll list after this)

Coolness: 10 (Good Job)

Originality: 9.5 (They don't resemble any official cards I'm familiar with, nor do they look like other from this forum - Good)

Playability: 9.5 (Nothing too over the top - Also Good)

 

Total: 9.4/10 (I can't recall anyone else other than Danilus getting over 9 for a complete set (Damnation))

 

Mistakes (Don't be discouraged by these, I'm doing them to try and help)

Warrior of light

Name should be 'Warrior of Light' with a capital 'L' (Other card makers should take note always put capital letters at the front of the active words)

The description was very easy to understand, but you spelled 'one' wrong twice, you wrote 'on'.

No Set ID, this isn't really important, I've noticed alot of people on here leave it out, but if you want the card to look as realistic as possible, include a Set ID, if you don't know what I mean, send me a PM and I will explain further.

 

Light madden

Name should be Light Madden for the same reason as before

The description quite easy to read, as it is a non-effect anyway, I'm guessing it's meant to say 'sent from heaven'.

Again, no Set ID.

 

Light Sage

No real problems here; Name = Good, Description = Good, No Set ID

 

Light Ball

No Set ID and a few minor mistakes in the description; Capital 'W' for 'when this card' is needed, also, I would've put a comma behind the word destroy, but that's just what I would do, I would suggest you do too, as if you look at Official Yugioh Cards you'll see why.

 

Light's Tribute

Capital 'T' for 'tribute' at the start of the description, 'to activate this card after that pick': I would've put 'to activate this card, pick', That's why Danilus usually has 10/10 for Understandable. The rest of the effect is really balanced and I particulary liked that card. You'll be getting sick of hearing this, but again, No Set ID.

 

Warrior of Light's Rebirth

PERFECT! But no Set ID.

 

Light Sword

'The monster equipped with this card gain 500 atk', I would have put 'gains 500 atk', but if you're going for a perfect ten, always put attack and defense as ATK and DEF, it matches the monster, to everyone: Never spell out attack or defense, always use the abreviation. No Set ID.

 

Anyway, that's all from me, I'm going look at some other cards now... then rate them and hopefully not make another 'mile long' post. :lol:

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