Squirrel Girl Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Here: This card can be Special Summoned from your hand when a "Blackwing" monster you control would be destroyed. When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK of 1 "Blackwing" monster you control by 500 (except this card). When this card attacks, you can change the Battle Position of the attacked monster. When this card destroy a monster by battle increase your Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 2 "Blackwing" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. RATE/COMMENT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 1st I Hate Twilight2nd you card was half a dissopointment reson 1 it's OP'd. reson 1 for beong OP'd 2700 can be Special Summoned WAY easy. 2 it increases a monsters ATK by 500. 3 You gian Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster it destroys. 3 you can then Special Summon 2! blackwing monsters of any level! and all withough a single Draw Back. 4/10 fix things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 It's not broken enough to be a Blackwing. It should be at least 2 levels lower so you can Synchro with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Thank both for comment, but just 1 thing, I wont change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Then this is the Worst Blackwing monster i've seen sorry 'AquaMaster' but you refuse to change anything which means you Fail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yus4eel Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 jeez so harsh lolu fail. lllol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Well... I am dissapointed. So hah! ------------->I HATE TWILIGHT<------------- Anyways, no offense to you, but the picture is terrible (yet still better than some of mine), the OCG is good, with a minor error or two (I won't point it out because you won't change your card), and it is WAY too OP'ed. NOTE: In Blackwing standards, it's UP'ed =0 I'd say an okay... Of... A5.0/10. For effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 More Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 More what? Everything has been said about your card. What "More" do you need? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmmed6 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 first thing is frist, i totally hate twilight, and that monster is way to op, as well as its level is to high. 4.685/10._. for the effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 More what? Everything has been said about your card. What "More" do you need? More comments you moron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 More comments you moronIf you're that starved for comments/rates (as we all are)' date=' I'll put aside my hate of Blackwings (and Twilight) and do a full rate of your card. [b']Effect[/b]: Let's see, an 8-Star 2700 beatstick that drops when you'd lose a Blackwing. Kind of like Gorz, but for BW. It gives a boost on Summon from anywhere, which becomes important later. Let's continue. It can control Battle Position on attack, and when you kill a monster, you get LP equal to half that card's ATK. But let's not forget the Pièce de résistance - When this card is destroyed, in any way, Special Summon 2 Blackwings from the Grave. (Which could even include another copy of this card, and boost a BW! OOH! [/sarcasm]). Sounds like a BW effect to me. And by that, I mean it's sickeningly broken. This card does too many things with too little drawbacks. (1 point). Grammar: I'm just going to post your effect and highlight the fixes. This card can be Special Summoned from your hand when a "Blackwing" monster you control would be destroyed. When this card is Summoned' date=' increase the ATK of 1 "Blackwing" monster you control by 500 (except this card). When this card [b']declares an attack[/b], you can change the Battle Position of the attack target. When this card destroys a monster by battle, increase your Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 2 "Blackwing" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. Not too many problems. (2 points). Style: You drew your own picture for this card, I'm guessing. That's a bold gamble. A gamble, though, that failed. I'm not an advocate of self-draw images, unless you're at the semi-pro or pro level. (EDIT:So you didn't draw the card yourself. Bad choice of pic, then, I'm afraid). Everything else, though, (including the background), is fine. (2 points). (+.5 for being bold). Overall: 5.5/10 5/10 *sigh* I'm never rating a Blackwing again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 The pic isn't mine. It's from a guy on DA. And I am not starved for comments/rates But thanks for comment but not the RATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 The pic isn't mine. It's from a guy on DA. And I am not starved for comments/ratesOh. Well' date=' in that case, you should have gotten a better picture. And it seemed like you were starved for rates, with a simple post of: More Sounds like a starved person's response to me. But thanks for comment but not the RATE...you asked for rates in the original post. Maybe you didn't read my signature, but I do rate harshly. I did explain my rating fairly well, though, so you can either take my advice to heart or disregard it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Everything has been said. It's actually not a good BW support, and it is OPed. Really easy to Summon etc. Well, since you want rates, but don't like them being low, I will give you something. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 I take it and flush it down the toilet ^^ Just joking, I throw it to the Tigers at a zoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackwing-Master Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 It's not broken enough to be a Blackwing. It should be at least 2 levels lower so you can Synchro with it.Shut up.The card, picture could have been better, but I'm not going to hold that against you. I think it would be better as a lv7, giving Vayu the ability to use it's effect for Silverwind without Armor master. The lp increase effect is uneeded, since BW's will try to go for the kill asap instead of standing around to gain lp. Last effect reminds me of Rescue cat. I say change it to: "When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 2 Level 4 or under non-Tuner "Blackwing" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position." so you don't get this as a free beater and you don't get an instant Synchro.Not horrible, but could be better. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Ok thanks for comment, will change it as you said but your ocg was off ^^ More comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackwing-Master Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 I figured it was, just wanted you to get the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Ok I get the idea. I will change it but not now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Okay a couple of things i am going to say: 1-Half of the Guys who posted here and of course i am referring to the 3 Star and 2 Star members who posted here deserve a Simple name :Morons. And by telling that i do not mean to offend any 3 Star or 2 Star Members but you are giving him bad Ratings just because you Hate Twilight and it has a Bad Picture. Well guess what; I hate Newbs that think they can offend anyone, so what. You can prove your Point that it is a bad Card once you do better.2-Even though i am not saying this card is broken and even though i respect the name, Picture and even after some OCG Errors even the OCG but the Effects is Overpowered. Not because it doesn't fit the Blackwing Archetype but because well the Effect are just too Strong.And even no Drawback. How about this and i am just trying to help here. Just send me all the Pictures you have used for Blackwings and i will make some Cards with them and try to help you see what how Blackwings work exactly.Okay? Above all i give it a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 I can send you some pics, and I have made alot of BW and I have not made all OPed, and they have not have pics like the once I using now. They are from JK's archive so they are better. And thanks for comment, I said I will change it so it's not that OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Okay just send me some Pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Ok want pics that looks almost like the pic on this card or a pic with better quality? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 why is it that, when I see your posts, they say "You won't be disappointing" and then I am o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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