~ Nightmare Arrives Set ~ 4/10

[Zeaux]

[align=center]So, I am trying to create Fiend monsters that also are Zombie monster. (crazy I know)

Since they are Zombie too, i had the idea of the Normal Summoning from the Graveyard, but you need to return monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck, but Zombies was made to be on the Graveyard, and that part is not that good, however you will gain a high ATK monster with some abusive effect. Ah, since their main type are Fiends, they need to suport Fiends. So, I've choose "Dark World" support. Most of them need to discard a card to activate their effects, helping both Zombies and Dark World. So, comment peoples, I need to know if this is good or no, balanced and blah blah blah blah. Helpful comments = +1 rep. I'll post more cards later.

 

Harmelin the Nightmare Soldier

 

 

~Card Effect~

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned from your hand. You can Normal Summon this card from your Graveyard by returning 1 Zombie or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to reduce the ATK or DEF of 1 monster on the field to 0. If you do, this card gain ATK equal to the original ATK or DEF of that monster until the End Phase.

 

Harvelin the Nightmare Beast

 

 

~Card Effect~

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned from your hand. You can Normal Summon this card from your Graveyard by returning 1 Zombie or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to negate the effect of 1 card on the field. If you do, this card gain the effect(s) of that card until the End Phase.

 

Duiwel Nightmare

 

 

~Card Effect~

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned from your hand. You can Normal Summon this card from your Graveyard without Tribute by returning 2 Zombie or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. If you do, this card gain the effect(s) of that card until the End Phase. Remove from play this card during the End Phase and send 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Mt'vare Nightmare

 

 

~Card Effect~

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned from your hand. You can Normal Summon this card from your Graveyard without Tribute by returning 2 Zombie or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to have this card gain ATK equal to the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. Remove from play this card during the End Phase and send 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard.[/align]

[FriendlyHost]

sweet effect. perfect image, nice ocg 10.5/10 FLAWLESS!!!!!!!

[Zeaux]

Thanks for the perfect rate dude! :D

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Amazing.

Pic fits it perfectly.

"If you do, this card gains the effect of that card until the End Phase."

Spelling errors. What can you do?

Other than that, the effect is great.

Like what you've done with MSE.

 

I'll rate this 10/10 for its epicness.

[Βyakuya]

Wow. Very realistic look. 8.5/10

[Zeaux]

Sorry for that error. ¬

You know, I don't speak english, is hard to me to have a perfect grammar. :/

 

Thanks for the perfect rate too dude. :D

And thank you too WarriorNinja22! :D

[.Impact]

u r back my man, a few errors. First gain in the last sentence should be gains. and I would make it a level 5 because of its good effect.

9.5/10 impressive

[Zeaux]

Yeah, I am back man. And how about you ? Where are your cards ? I am missing them, seriously. Thanks for the comment dude.

[.Impact]

oh dont worry huge set comin soon and chek out magical storage in search a pretty ood card i think anyway good job

[Zeaux]

I already checked and commented. haha

Okay then, I'll for it.

[Dr. Percival Cox]

Very good young Skywalker lol.

It's like a modified Stardust that absorbs, huh.

One thing tho.If it negated a Spell or Trap what would happen?

Rate: 9.9/10

[Zeaux]

He will gain the effect of that card. lol

But if you negate the effect of a Equip, Continuous Spell/Trap Card... I reallt don't what will happen. D:

 

Thanks for the rate dude.

[metomario]

hmm im new but i have a really quick suggestion: instead of

"You can Normal Summon this card from your Graveyard by returning 1 Zombie or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck."

maybe u can say something like:

"You can summon this card from your Graveyard by returning 1 Zombie or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck. This summon is treated as a Normal Summon."

Correct me if im wrong but arnt most normal summons from ur hand? o.o

other than that id give it 9.5/10 *love its effect and the image is perfect :D

[Zeaux]

I think both ways are correct. Just tried something never seen before. Thanks for the comment dude.

[jayjack]

"If you do, this card gain the effect of that card until the End Phase." --> "If you do, this card gains the effect(s) of that card until the End Phase."

 

It has too much ATK for such an OP effect. Suggest you either up the level or down the ATK. Other than that, it's pretty good. OP, but useful. 8.8/10

[Zeaux]

If I change it's Level he will need a Tribute, and I don't want it. Maybe you haven't noticed, but I made it Level 4 so it can be Set from your hand, this is why the 0 DEF. I'll lower the ATK. Thanks jayjack.

[Cloister]

This can get really strong. And the effects are like just put into the card...

 

But I still like it. And as usual, perfect OCG.

[Zeaux]

Thanks Tom.

Added a new card. Limited Edition thing has some problems, but I am too lazy to fix it.

Comment on the new card peoples;

[Yang Xiao-Long]

New card is great.

OCG looks good.

Pic is excellent.

I like the effect, draining their stats and dealing even greater damage. So many uses...

MSE makes it look awesum too.

 

I'll give it a 10/10

[Rosuke]

I Loves it ! i like the Effects , Pics Are greats no OCG errors 11/10 30 Pts to you . (Sorry ican't give more reps Today)

[Zeaux]

Thanks both for those rates! :D

[Zeaux]

BUMP

[Kato_Zenamara]

Umm... you need to change the second one's ATK gaining effect. High ATKs are a must in any deck, and use this effect on that High ATK monster, and you've got an insta-OTK here. Imagine reducing the ATK of a Blue-Eyes to 0 with its effect, which would give it 4850 ATK. Permenantly. Then, ATKing that Blue-eyes for an instant 4850 damage to your opponent.

 

Either make the effect only last till the end phase or... something. Other than that, very good. I like the ideas for the effects and summonings.

[Zeaux]

Oooh no, sorry for that. I forgot to put "until the End Phase" at the second card. If you look at the first one, it has that part. Sorry for that, I'll fix it.

[Zeaux]

BUMP.

 

New cards added.