Zextra Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Hi all. I'm entering this card in a contest, so I really need suggestions on how to fix it/improve it. Also, I'm not great at OCG, so if someone could help me on that, that would be great. Thanks in advance! Lore:1 WATER Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner WATER monstersThis card gains ATK and DEF equal to the amount of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x500. For each non-Tuner Synchro-material monsters used to Summon this card, this card gets 1 additional attack. Once per turn, you can remove 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard from play to negate the effect of a card that targets or destroys this card. When 4 or more monsters are removed from play through this card's effect, you can destroy all cards on the field and inflict damage to you and your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x400. EDITED: Lore:1 WATER Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner WATER monstersThis card gains ATK equal to the amount of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x400. For each non-Tuner Synchro-material monster used to Synchro Summon this card, this card gets 1 additional attack. Your opponent cannot select another WATER monster you control as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove 1 WATER monster in your Graveyard from play to negate the effect of a card that destroys this card. When 4 or more monsters are removed from play through this card's effect, you can destroy all non-WATER monsters on the field and inflict damage to you and your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x400. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 bump.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 OCG:"For each non-Tuner Synchro-material monsters used to Summon this card, this card gains 1 additional attack." That is a VERY powerful Synchro; however, you balanced it out somewhat with Summoning restrictions and the damage to yourself with the activation of its effect.The pic is nice, but it's also overused... Still a great card though.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Thanks for your review. I appreciate it. I updated the card to make it a little more balanced. Can you tell me it I underpowered it too much? Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 OCG:"This card gains ATK equal to the amount of WATER monsters in your Graveyard x400. For each non-Tuner Synchro-material monster used to Synchro Summon this card, this card gains 1 additional attack. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another WATER monster you control as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove 1 WATER monster in your Graveyard from play to negate the effect of a card that destroys this card. When 4 or more monsters are removed from play through this card's effect, you can destroy all non-WATER monsters on the field and inflict damage to you and your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x400." I guess it's almost the same as the last one, only you added that WATER protection and removing cards from play.I'll stick with my previous rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 ok thank you :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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