xAwKx Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Tell me any fixes i should make, or anyways i can improve.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 1 OCG errors (Official Card Grammar)face up = face-upHand = handFire-Type monster (Fire is an Attribute so you must spell it FIRE) FIRE monster correction:This card is also treated as a FIRE monster. If you control 1 or more FIRE monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. 2. is too OP'ed. (Overpowered) with 3600 ATK and 3000 DEF and a Special Summon from your hand while you control 1 FIRE monster? improvement:This card is also treated as a FIRE monster. If you control 1 or more FIRE monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, you must dicard your hand to the Graveyard. Your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster with 2000 or more DEF to Defense Position from his/her hand, Deck or Graveyard. for a new guy very good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 this is Op'ed but good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mahboi99 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Tell me any fixes i should make' date=' or anyways i can improve.Thanks[/quote']Okay treated as a fire monster????? W T F other than that this card is good, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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