Nt3K Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 This is my first card, I hope you like it. :)-Nt3K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Not too bad for a first-timer. A few things, though: You may want to lower its ATK to make sure it's not too overpowered, maybe somewhere around 1800. And for the second effect, it'll deal damage to your opponent's Life Points regardless if the WATER monster you're attacking is in Attack Position. Maybe change it to, "This card inflicts Piercing Damage to WATER monsters." I'll leave the grammer errors to someone else. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nt3K Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Thanks; I'll fix the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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