gigiben Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 what do you think :shock: ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 yo change ur effect to this:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters you control. During your Battle Phase you can pay 1500 Life Points to attack your Opponent directly.I think this is the right ocg.. i think..plus its Winged-Beast, not Winged Beast Overall cards okay, nice card for a beginner 8/10 nice work dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moppmoppmopp Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Better than the most of my pics. Have not readed the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Good for a beginner. Not horribly OP'ed. Some capitalization errors on OCG, but overall not bad. Oh, next time, post the text so it's easier to read. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gigiben Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 thanks for everybody! friendlyhost: ill use your idea and change the effect. mopp: thanks! zmuzik: thanks, and next time ill use your idea and put the effect below the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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