Grunt Issun Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Just give me critism, good or bad, tell me whats wrong with it, and all ways give me a rating if you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Ocg errors. can not, is one word. Cannot. and instead of when ever, get rid of the ever. Just put when. After when this card is destroyed, put and sent to the graveyard(,) Never forget the comma. "discard 1 card to have this card gain 200 atk" And I'm not sure about the last part. Ask someone else. Good / Bad (I like the pic and everything else, it just doesnt have good OCG)I rate it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Iiiiil fix the errorsitz bttr nw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Graveyard, Normal Summoned, Set, Special Summoned: these should all be capitalized. Your second sentence needs to be split up into actual sentences as it doesn't make complete sense currently :P Interesting effect, though I think you could boost his base stats since it's harder to summon him. EDIT: Oh and the Warrior in the title should be capitalized, too :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted June 16, 2010 Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 Hate to be a git but zombie warrior is an old fusion card but lets say you made it obsolete with this card 2000 ATK would work perfect the effect is good the pic cool and ocg now perfect so 9/10 this would work great in any zombie deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted June 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2010 HELLZ YEAH! I havent got that good a rating since I made my...well actually I cant remember because the last ones I made were posted at least 2 weeks ago and no one posred there at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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