MY FIRST CARD--Demios, Bringer Of Oblivion

[Lalapop]

I found this site because I was looking for it and BAM...it existed. So I joined and looked at the card creation system and thought to start making my own. Here is my first. I have a set in creation right now, theme based, soon to be completed. Please give me as much ratings as you can. I believe I have the OCG as close to how I want it with such a lengthy and wordy effect. I tried my best to make it as balanced as possible but its purpose is still to be a trumph card. So with that in mind...here you are: Demios, Bringer Of Oblivion

 

 

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by 1 Tributing 1 Lv. 6 or higher monster and paying 4000 Life Points. The Summoning of this card cannot be negated. Once per duel you can remove from play all cards on both player's side of the field, their hands and both graveyards except this card. This card cannot enter the field more than once per duel. If you use this effect, this card cannot declare attack except by paying 1000 Life Points. Spells and Traps cannot be activated when this card attacks and it cannot be destroyed or removed from the field by a card effect.

[rushraptor]

the pic isnt very original but the effect seems um whats the word O.P ah well 6/10

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

Art: Overused pic. 3/10

OCG: VERY GOOD for a new member, 9/10.

Stats: Appropriate for a 10 star.

Effect: A little OP'd in my opinion, regardless of the drawbacks. Cards that are completely indestructible are a little broken. 7/10

 

Great for a new member, however, +rep! :D

[Lalapop]

1) I figured the pic was common because it was top on Google but it fit the name and effect.

2) Its not indestructible...it just cant be removed by a card effect but can still be destroyed by battle and can still be affected by the effects of Spell and Traps. I just thought for the cost of summoning it would only be fair for it not to be destroyed so easily...lets say a simply Raigeki Break. And for the cost of attacking i thought it only be fair it would be somewhat guaranteed. Note it doesnt say Spells and Traps cannot be activated at all or during the battle phase...just in response to it's attack...cards may be activated before and after. And for the the removing cards from play effects...there are other real cards that can do similar a number of times per duel...I attempted to balance it by only allowing the use of it's effect once.

 

Well...that was my reasoning to how i worded the effects...thanks for the comments so far ....and the rep! :)

[Lalapop]

Anyone? Im eager and hungry for rates and votes and such. O.O

[Shizuku Oikawa]

almost perfect OCG

over used pic

fun name

Kinda Overpowered

8/10

I'm sure you'll be great at making cards with card maker in no time.

 

you know the Ancient Gears have the no traps or spell cards can be activated when attacking effect

 

"When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step."

[Toot]

the effect is ok and it looks like you hv good OCG

but i think its Op'ed and the pic is overused.

good effort

6.5/10

[Lalapop]

bleh...ok i tried to balance it out with Summoning restictions and attack cost and removing all the controller's cards from play also...but i guess it's still OP'd i spose -_-. I'll think of some edits.

[Hungry Panda]

its great for a first card. OP'd and overused pic. due to that ill give u a 6/10. if you change it PM it to me and ill give you a gift.

[Tortoise Kyle]

Overused pic, broken to hell (But besides that, only a little overpowered) and great OCG.

 

8.5/10