Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 How is this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceydude168 Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Nice, although you can add a second type to the card, you know. Just put Dragon(space)/(space)Machine in the "type" box. OK effect and OCG (I think) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 lol thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orange Lightning Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 [align=justify]-> "This face-up card is treated as a Machine-Type monster..." (so when this card is on the field it's a Machine, and when it's in your hand it's treated as a Dragon? if it's so, I don't see much use maybe you wanted "This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster" that's better just saying). -> Where's "Super Mech Drago"? [EDIT: I've Seen it] -> "If there is a face-up "Super Mech Drago" this Monster cannot declare an attack." --> Sounds better this way IMO: "This card cannot declare an attack while there's a "Super Mech Drago" on the field." Also I don't see it's use 'cause there's no "Super Mech Drago" here... -> "When this card is successfully summoned you can discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy one monster on the field." --> Correction: "When this card is Summoned, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 monster on the field."[/align]Picture looks good, OCG It's a bit off as creativity, lame effects. I'll give you a 6/10 for the effort, keep trying! Nice' date=' [u']although you can add a second type to the card, you know. Just put Dragon(space)/(space)Machine in the "type" box.[/u] OK effect and OCG (I think) 9/10 NO ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 lol its somewhere in this forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 OCG fix is given.Pic is ok.Effect is somewhat OP, maybe add that it can't attack after destroying a monster?Name fits the card.A 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Nice. A little slight there, but good job! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 lol ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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