Rhaan, Druid of the Carrion Swarm

[karldark]

So this inspired by one of my D&D characters.

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

● This card is also treated as an Insect-Type monster. Twice per turn, You can remove from play 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

The "BEEEES" on the pic ruined it...

OCG:

"This card is also treated as an Insect-Type monster. You can remove from play 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

OPed. At least add a restriction to the remove from play part. Maybe restrict it to just your Graveyard? Also, you may want to restrict it to just once per turn?

7/10

[karldark]

The "BEEEES" on the pic ruined it...

perhaps you don't understand my sense of humor.

OCG:

"This card is also treated as an Insect-Type monster. You can remove from play 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

OPed. At least add a restriction to the remove from play part. Maybe restrict it to just your Graveyard? Also' date=' you may want to restrict it to just once per turn?

7/10

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once per turn would probably be good. sorry on the english fail my brain has a way of omitting words or changing them without me ever noticing until it's well to late...

[Ｎｏ.３９ 希望皇ホープ]

he Beeees thing was funny although not quite appropriate for the card

 

As far as his effect, keep it a Gemini and:

Maybee try: "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

 

or: "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

 

or something else you can think of 6.5/10

[karldark]

he Beeees thing was funny although not quite appropriate for the card

 

As far as his effect' date=' keep it a Gemini and:

Maybee try: "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

 

or: "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. This effect can be activated during either player's turn."

 

or something else you can think of 6.5/10

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allow me to describe the fluff of the character as i think it will help you better understand the card. So rhaan is a druid that turns himself into swarms of carrion insects (that's be insects that eat dead flesh). He often uses this ability to soften incoming blows. Once per turn seemed like not enough. twice per turn seems like too much... maybe once per turn and mild effect for killing a monster in battle.

[Lexadin]

Pic totally unfitting for Realistic Cards.

OCG fix is given.

Effect is incredible OP, it removed your opps Grave aswell?! Ussually they restrict that part alone!

If I where you, I would change it 2 once per turn, or something like that. Or try to lowering its stats/raising its Level.

A 6/10

[karldark]

Pic totally unfitting for Realistic Cards.

card art doesn't matter the mechanics do

Effect is incredible OP' date=' it removed your opps Grave aswell?! Ussually they restrict that part alone!

If I where you, I would change it 2 once per turn, or something like that. Or try to lowering its stats/raising its Level.[/quote'] i could see raising the level to 8. however it's a gemini monster their abilities are suppose to be potent.

A 6/10

i think i ought to sig: "please don't rate my cards as all of your ratings are worthless and don't help with design at all."