WritingMyLullaby Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 These are my first cards from my two current sets. I made them today and last night. Any suggestions? Can I make them better? Purest Love Cards: Monsters: Purest Love: The Maiden Of LightAtk/Def: 1300/2100Effect:Gains 200 attack points for every Purest Love monster on the Field or in the Graveyard. Purest Love: The Swordsman Of DarknessAtk/Def: 2900/2200 Spell: The Lover's HeartIf Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light is on the field, you can automatically special summon Purest Love: The Swordsman of Darkness from your Deck or Graveyard. Hearts On Fire Hearts On Fire: Girl Of The FlamesAtk/Def: 1600/1200Effect:Instead of taking battle damage when this card is attacked, you gain the same amount of Life Points as the Attack Points of the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gigiben Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 im not an expert but i think you got some ocg errors like: when you right a cards name you need to right it like this: "Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light" and not like this: Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light.i think there some others but its still good for first cards, but there was one more problem and thats the fact that your cards are overpowered. overall: 7.50\10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WritingMyLullaby Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 im not an expert but i think you got some ocg errors like: when you right a cards name you need to right it like this: "Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light" and not like this: Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light.i think there some others but its still good for first cards' date=' but there was one more problem and thats the fact that your cards are overpowered. overall: 7.50\10[/quote'] Okay, Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 I think the swordsman of darkness is a tad bit OP. but besides that pretty good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 dark sword guy doesnt look very dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 maiden of light/ This card gains 200 ATK for every "Purest Love" card on the field and in your Graveyard.Swordsman of darkness/sorry but I hate normal cards.The lovers heart/If Purest Love: This card can only be activated while you control 1 or more "Purest Love: The Maiden Of Light" Special Summon "Purest Love: The Swordsman of Darkness" from your Deck or Graveyard. And the last can't be bothered with sorry.6/10 for the lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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