The Dood Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 not sure if its good or bad so cld u rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 creator1 is a stupid name it's Op'ed and Up'ed you used ans overused pic and don'tcapitalize the sub types4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Erhm, let me go over whats wrong:1) Dont capitalize types.2) Dark isnt a type.3) Effect cards are orange, not yellow.4) The pic is overused.5) I'm sure you overlooked the fact that the STRONGEST CARDS IN THE GAME have 5000 ATK. Your card is NOT one of them. Lets look over whats good:1) It has an real effect! ZOMG! Its an effect that actually makes sense and is grammatically correct! Grammatically, not OCG correct. The OCG is horrible, and theres only 9 words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dood Posted June 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 THANKS FOR TELLING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
type87randomXD Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 one word:CLICHE!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Super OP'd, OCG is bad, way over used pic, and the card is yellow not orange. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 creator1 is a stupid name it's Op'ed and Up'ed you used ans overused pic and don'tcapitalize the sub types4/10 Erhm' date=' let me go over whats wrong:1) Dont capitalize types.2) Dark isnt a type.3) Effect cards are orange, not yellow.4) The pic is overused.5) I'm sure you overlooked the fact that the STRONGEST CARDS IN THE GAME have 5000 ATK. Your card is NOT one of them. Lets look over whats good:1) It has an real effect! ZOMG! Its an effect that actually makes sense and is grammatically correct! Grammatically, not OCG correct. The OCG is horrible, and theres only 9 words.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Sorry, but it's OP'd. It has an effect but you didn't make it an effect card and you capitalized all of the letters in its name.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surging Dragon - Iniquity Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 You've gotten the point that it's OP'd... so I won't state the obvious.. maybe if we made the card a bit more realistic..... Name:The Dark DragonLevel:12Monster Type: DragonAttribute: DarkCard Type: EffectEffect: "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of your opponents Spell and Trap cards."ATK: 3400DEF: 2800 I'm just a newbie to OCG by it seems a bit better. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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