The Dood Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 ONLY SECOND CARD JUST A BIT BORED SO I MADE THIS IF ANYTHINGS WRONG PLZ TELL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Yes, there is a LOT wrong. 1) Turn off caps lock.2) Its blatantly obvious you have no clue what the hell a Spirit monster is.3) SPIRIT/EFFECT is NOT a type. Dragon is a Type. Zombie is a Type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dahal123 Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 Spirit is not a type, and they go back to their hand at the end of the turn. OCG errors, but not that bad. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 17, 2010 Report Share Posted June 17, 2010 3/10 lol, everythings wrong on this card, image, type, ocg, blah blah blah.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Yeah, improve everything above:-for the name, only capitalize the first letter of each word-choose a real type: as Kato_Zenamara suggested, possibly Dragon or Zombie-you misspelled ghost-look up a Spirit monster's effect-OCG problems Try to learn how to do these correctly, as of right now, you only get a 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 I laugh at this card. You spelt ghost wrong. Spirit is not a type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodz Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 yea evrythings is wrong!!!!!3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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