The Living Forest

[ParaToxic]

A fast one before going to bed.

Rate/Hate/Comment

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]

This card can only be activated if you control a Plant-Type monster. Activate this card when your opponent Special Summons a Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type monster. Destroy it and activate the following effect depending on its type:

-Warrior: Your opponent loses Life Points equal to the destroyed monsters ATK

-Spellcaster: Your opponent discards 2 Spell Cards from his Deck

 

 

 

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[touzaikokon]

Effect: (1 point).

Meh, too specific. It's not even negation, which it should be if it's going to be this specific and activate on Summon.

 

Grammar: (2 points).

I'm very tired right now, I'll just post a fix:

 

"This card can only be activated if you control a Plant-Type monster. When your opponent Special Summons a Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster, destroy it and activate the following effect based on the destroyed monster's Type:

-Warrior: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monsters ATK.

-Spellcaster: Your opponent sends 2 Spell Cards from his Deck to the Graveyard."

 

Style: (3 points).

Pic looks awesome, card looks awesome, etc.

 

 

Overall: 6/10

[Toot]

Effect: (1 point).

Meh' date=' too specific. It's not even negation, which it should be if it's going to be this specific and activate on Summon.

 

[b']Grammar[/b]: (2 points).

I'm very tired right now, I'll just post a fix:

 

"This card can only be activated if you control a Plant-Type monster. When your opponent Special Summons a Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster, destroy it and activate the following effect based on the destroyed monster's Type:

-Warrior: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monsters ATK.

-Spellcaster: Your opponent sends 2 Spell Cards from his Deck to the Graveyard."

 

Style: (3 points).

Pic looks awesome, card looks awesome, etc.

 

 

Overall: 6/10

 

i agree

+1pt for effort

 

7/10