Altaïr Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 This Fan Fic was moved to this thread..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 people please rate and comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 what the crap gohan died well iguess that would've happened in time but still but anyway pretty good fanfic on a scale from 1 to 10 i'd say its a 8.5 cuz it could use a tiny touch up and it could be better if it was an rp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 well i couldn't get people.......... :?except dfgk101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 bumpcould anyone read this thing?and rate whats so far? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 i can understand that cuz not many people like db rps but seriously come on people it ain't that bad a fan fic seriously the more i think about it the better it seems and excelent additions keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThunderousSonar Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 To be blunt, your Dragon Ball Z chronology is horrible. Horrible to the point where horrible is an understatement. Primarily: Chapter 1: It was 12:00 PM on Earth in the Plains that Vegeta and Trunks were training....."Big Bang Attack!" said Vegeta aiming it at Trunks. Trunks dodged the blast and turned Super Sayian,This takes me back when me and Father were training to take down Cell. TRUNKS WAS A BABY WHEN CELL CAME. FUTURE Trunks fought with Goku during the Cell games. Trunks un-sheathed the sword he got fro Tapion, Trunks charged to Vegeta in the air ready to go for a deathly blow, Vegeta dodged the stab and hit Trunks so hard Trunks went crashing to the ground a mile away.Time to go Super Sayian 2 thought Vegeta, he then transformed into Super Sayian 2 form. Normal Trunks NEVER GETS A SWORD. REWATCH GT, when he was the same age as he was when he came from the future. "Time to die Trunks, hahahahahaha!" said Vegeta while spreading his arms apart on both sides of his body, "Final Flash!" said Vegeta closing both hands together and shooting a beam from both hands together. Hello.....you just did BIG BANG ATTACK, and now, you're doing Final Flash! Even after doing Calick Gun, Vegeta needs a minute to recharge. The beam then penetrated Trunk' armor straight into his chest........ The training room Bulma made that simulates battles transformed back into its original state. "Father,you beat me again. I have failed,for the twenieth time." said Trunks with a playful smile on his face,"You still should try to fight Piccolo or Gohan." HELLO Gohan is A BUSINESS MAN. NO MORE FIGHTING FOR HIM!!! (Have you seen GT at all?) Bulma then walked through a door saying, "Trunks that wasn't the worse you have fought on the twenty recordings against Vegeta, besides your father was using one of his strongest moves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 first thing is first GT is concidered non-canon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThunderousSonar Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 First of all check your facts, if it was considered non canon, then that would just be plain stupid as it concludes the series and ties up almost all loose ends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 true,but not all the loose ends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 nice i like volume 2 please keep it up but add some twists every now and then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 oh,theres gonna be twists Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 keep it up.refer to the old db every now and then to find insperation for your fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 There is Weather Reports, Foe Fiction, and Phantom's Divination's. These topics showed us that we have great, good, and terrible writers here on YCM. But now there is a new review topic. As a Pokemon will review FanFics. Pichu's reviews. A new generation of reviewing has come. [spoiler=#9: Dragon Ball ZX: Rise of Evil by mason1999]9th review time! We now start Dragon Ball ZX: Rise of Evil. Please note I know nothing about Dragon Ball. Volume 1 Episode 1:The Three Deaths Part 1 It was 12:00 PM on Earth in the Plains that Vegeta and Trunks were training....."Big Bang Attack!" That's funny! I'm watching Big Bang Theory and I read this. said Vegeta aiming it at Trunks. Trunks dodged the blast and turned Super Sayian.Trunks un-sheathed the sword he got from Tapion, Trunks charged to Vegeta in the air ready to go for a deathly blow, Vegeta dodged the stab and hit Trunks so hard Trunks went crashing to the ground a mile away.Time to go Super Sayian 2 thought Vegeta, he then transformed into Super Sayian 2 form. We have a big battle sence here! Who doesn't like battle sences? "Time to die Trunks, hahahahahaha!" said Vegeta while spreading his arms apart on both sides of his body, "Final Flash!" said Vegeta closing both hands together and shooting a beam from both hands together. The beam then penetrated Trunk' armor strait into his chest........ Sounds painful. Like the Frying Pan Treatment. The training room Bulma made that simulates battles transformed back into its original state."Father,you beat me again. I have failed,for the twenieth time." said Trunks with a playful smile on his face,"You still should try to fight Piccolo or Gohan." Father!? Twenieth time!? The 20th Star Wars: Trunks, I am your father! Bulma then walked through a door saying, "Trunks that wasn't the worse you have fought on the twenty recordings against Vegeta, besides your father was using one of his strongest moves in his Super Sayian 2 form," Super Sayian? I fear it is like Super Sonic..... said Bulma looking to where Vegeta was a second a go,"He must have left to go train, how 'bout you give it a break and rest for a couple of hours?" suggested Bulma. Trunks then nodded and left to go change. That was short! OWAIT! There's more! Part 2 Gohan felt a very strong Ki towards the North,where the Dragon Ball Shrine is,and also where all seven Dragon Balls were, Dragons have seven!?!?!? "I have to get there before they get inside and make a wish on the Dragon Balls, I thought it was make a wish on a shooting star not make a wish on a dragon's private area. even if Father stops trys to stop them he may fail with a Ki that strong!" Gohan then made a mad dash towards the Dragon Ball Shrine.......When he arrived he saw that Vegeta and Piccolo were fighting off three strong villans:Broly,Cell and a unknown demonish monster. How could Broly and Cell get out of Hell?! Gohan thought, he then turned into Ultimate Gohan(Mystic Gohan) and dove into the battle.......... A battle for the balls! Ewwwww. "Vegeta! What is that monster?!" yelled Piccolo while dodging Broly's punches, when Gohan came and delivered a mortal blow to Cell."Its name is Janemba!" said Vegeta fighting the evil monster Janemba. "Hahahahaha,I remember you!" said Janemba,"The only way you stoped me was using the Fusion Technique, whch wont work now!" said Janemba pulling out his sword,"Ready to dance with death?!" while stabbing into Vegeta's armor. NO! HE CAN'T DIE! IT'S NOT EVEN CHAPTER 3 YET! ALL THE DYING HAPPENS IN CHAPTER 3!!!!! "Noooooo!!" said Gohan as he was fighting Cell, "I'm getting tired of this Cell! Super Kamehameha!" said Gohan when he was about to release the blast Janemba grabbed Gohan and stabbed him letting go of the sword."Gohan!" said Piccolo as Broly threw him against rock solid stone,"Go........han.......go.....to....Den....de" said Piccolo as he transported him to Dende's Tower. Why........is........he.......ta.......lking.....l.....ike.......t.....his? "Gohan!" yelled Dende as he saw the bleeding Sayian on the ground with a sword in him,"Don't worry Gohan I will heal you!" said Dende."Den......de......Broly........Cell....and..........Janemba....are going to get the Dragon Balls...." said Gohan........ Shooting Stars are better! "Gohan,I will heal you!" said Dende desprately trying to heal the mortal wounds."Dende......warn....the...others........" said Gohan before he died. OoO! Two deaths! OH NOIES! Chapter three is when everyone dies, as I quoted. I will read the rest of this story to find out if they come back to life! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 I haven't seen any of the Dragon Ball franchise and I still know that GT was made without any input from the original author, which basically makes it somebody's fanfiction that ended up getting animated. So yeah, ignoring it is perfectly reasonable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 i cant see sarchasm over the internet, so Im going to assume what crab said was completly straight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 1 - Part 1 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,224)]It was 12:00 PM on Earth in the Plains that Vegeta and Trunks were training.....Goku: Like Father like Son.Vegeta: Hmph...You train with your son everyday. Yeah...Train. "Big Bang Attack!" said Vegeta aiming it at Trunks. Trunks dodged the blast and turned Super Sayian.Goku: Is that the only attack you know?Vegeta: Yessum.Goku: And how did Trunks go super saiyan without even trying?Bulma: Hes a son of mine.All: ... Trunks un-sheathed the sword he got from Tapion.Goku: I always thought it was tape worm. When is this set, anyway?Trunks: I didnt get a sword. I actually got a real tape worm. Really...I never got a sword. Trunks charged to Vegeta in the air ready to go for a deathly blow, Vegeta dodged the stab and hit Trunks so hard Trunks went crashing to the ground a mile away.Bulma: You just killed my son!Vegeta: Oh well babe...Now we can have alone time?Goku: o.O Time to go Super Sayian 2 thought Vegeta, he then transformed into Super Sayian 2 form.Goku: Now you can go Super Saiyan 2 without trying? I even had to try to go super saiyan when I was in GT, which is when my power level was clearly over 9000!!!! "Time to die Trunks, hahahahahaha!" said Vegeta while spreading his arms apart on both sides of his body, "Final Flash!" said Vegeta closing both hands together and shooting a beam from both hands together.Nappa: Hey, why am I here?Omega Shenron: That attack is only attainable at a super saiyan 4 level... The beam then penetrated Trunk' armor strait into his chest........The training room Bulma made that simulates battles transformed back into its original state.Goku: Thats right. Kill him, and then bring him back to life in a click sort of way.Chi-Chi: Wont we get sued for copyright of the word click? "Father,you beat me again. I have failed,for the twenieth time." said Trunks with a playful smile on his face,"You still should try to fight Piccolo or Gohan."Vegeta: Yes, you puny insignificant fool. THE 20TH TIME!Gohan: Apparently, as me being the son of the most canon-character, I am stronger then you.Piccolo: As am I. I was Gokus rival in the original series, so I must be stronger.Goku: You could have atleast put a space there. Bulma then walked through a door saying, "Trunks that wasn't the worse you have fought on the twenty recordings against Vegeta, besides your father was using one of his strongest moves in his Super Sayian 2 form," said Bulma looking to where Vegeta was a second a go,Vegeta: My strongest attack in Super Saiyan 2 is big bang attack woman! "He must have left to go train, how 'bout you give it a break and rest for a couple of hours?" suggested Bulma. Trunks then nodded and left to go change.Trunks: Me? A couple of hours? I was just part of a video recording. Hmph. [spoiler=Episode 1 - Part 2 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,225)]Gohan felt a very strong Ki towards the North,where the Dragon Ball Shrine is,and also where all seven Dragon Balls were, Goku: Ive never been so proud of his intelligence. "I have to get there before they get inside and make a wish on the Dragon Balls,even if Father stops trys to stop them he may fail with a Ki that strong!"Goku: Me? Fail? Im the canon character! I never fail.Vegeta: Give it up... Gohan then made a mad dash towards the Dragon Ball Shrine.......Nappa: Hey, Im back here again.Vegeta: What else is he going to do? Slither? When he arrived he saw that Vegeta and Piccolo were fighting off three strong villans:Broly,Cell and a unknown demonish monster. How could Broly and Cell get out of Hell?! Gohan thought, Goku: They left?Vegeta: The gates broke?Trunks: I gave them my tape worm?All: Uh...Janemba: I refuse to be called demonish. And I am not unknown. In the time line youre on about, you should know me by now. he then turned into Ultimate Gohan(Mystic Gohan) and dove into the battle..........Gohan: Apparently I dont need the Z Sword anymore. "Vegeta! What is that monster?!" yelled Piccolo while dodging Broly's punches, when Gohan came and delivered a mortal blow to Cell.Cell: Yeah, let Gohan kill me again.Piccolo: He seems familiar. His name was...Janefu...Janambe...Janemba? Nah. I think it was just Jan.Vegeta: Im the only one who has an actual memory!Gohan: Yeah, take my MORTAL blow! Im from the videogame series, Mortal Kombat.Goku: ...FALCOOOOOWN PAUNCH! "Its name is Janemba!" said Vegeta fighting the evil monster Janemba.Vegeta: I think the other likes Janemba. He made me say his name, and then repeated it in the same sentence.Gohan: Maybe he just cant write. "Hahahahaha,I remember you!" said Janemba,"The only way you stoped me was using the Fusion Technique, whch wont work now!" said Janemba pulling out his sword,Vegeta: See? I told you we had seen him before.Piccolo and Gohan: ...Janemba: Oww. Ripping off skin and using it as a sword hurts. "Ready to dance with death?!" while stabbing into Vegeta's armor.Vegeta: I was meant to go to the club and dance with him yesterday. "Noooooo!!" said Gohan as he was fighting Cell, "I'm getting tired of this Cell! Super Kamehameha!" said Gohan when he was about to release the blast Janemba grabbed Gohan and stabbed him letting go of the sword.Cell: Sure, now kill me exactly the same way as you did in the series aswell.Broly: Why does this remind me of the actual Janemba movie?Gohan: Super Exclamation Mark on a sentence which didnt need one haaaa! "Gohan!" said Piccolo as Broly threw him against rock solid stone,"Go........han.......go.....to....Den....de" said Piccolo as he transported him to Dende's Tower.Piccolo: I have enough power to teleport you safely out of battle, to a place tens of miles away, but not to get up and just help you up. "Gohan!" yelled Dende as he saw the bleeding Sayian on the ground with a sword in him,"Don't worry Gohan I will heal you!" said Dende.Dende: I will take this skin out of you, then magically heal it because I cant do anything else.Gohan: Really, Im not hurt. Im telling you, Im fine. This is just blood which came from Janemba! He took off skin, after all. "Den......de......Broly........Cell....and..........Janemba....are going to get the Dragon Balls...." said Gohan........"Gohan,I will heal you!" said Dende desprately trying to heal the mortal wounds."Dende......warn....the...others........" said Gohan before he died.Gohan: Dont heal me! Just let me die while I tell you to warn the others, which I could have done after you quickly healed me.Vegeta: And there goes another Canon! And how am I talking? Didnt Janemba just kill me, like he did with nearly everyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 1 - Part 1 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,224)]It was 12:00 PM on Earth in the Plains that Vegeta and Trunks were training.....Goku: Like Father like Son.Vegeta: Hmph...You train with your son everyday. Yeah...Train. "Big Bang Attack!" said Vegeta aiming it at Trunks. Trunks dodged the blast and turned Super Sayian.Goku: Is that the only attack you know?Vegeta: Yessum.Goku: And how did Trunks go super saiyan without even trying?Bulma: Hes a son of mine.All: ... Trunks un-sheathed the sword he got from Tapion.Goku: I always thought it was tape worm. When is this set, anyway?Trunks: I didnt get a sword. I actually got a real tape worm. Really...I never got a sword. Trunks charged to Vegeta in the air ready to go for a deathly blow, Vegeta dodged the stab and hit Trunks so hard Trunks went crashing to the ground a mile away.Bulma: You just killed my son!Vegeta: Oh well babe...Now we can have alone time?Goku: o.O Time to go Super Sayian 2 thought Vegeta, he then transformed into Super Sayian 2 form.Goku: Now you can go Super Saiyan 2 without trying? I even had to try to go super saiyan when I was in GT, which is when my power level was clearly over 9000!!!! "Time to die Trunks, hahahahahaha!" said Vegeta while spreading his arms apart on both sides of his body, "Final Flash!" said Vegeta closing both hands together and shooting a beam from both hands together.Nappa: Hey, why am I here?Omega Shenron: That attack is only attainable at a super saiyan 4 level... The beam then penetrated Trunk' armor strait into his chest........The training room Bulma made that simulates battles transformed back into its original state.Goku: Thats right. Kill him, and then bring him back to life in a click sort of way.Chi-Chi: Wont we get sued for copyright of the word click? "Father,you beat me again. I have failed,for the twenieth time." said Trunks with a playful smile on his face,"You still should try to fight Piccolo or Gohan."Vegeta: Yes, you puny insignificant fool. THE 20TH TIME!Gohan: Apparently, as me being the son of the most canon-character, I am stronger then you.Piccolo: As am I. I was Gokus rival in the original series, so I must be stronger.Goku: You could have atleast put a space there. Bulma then walked through a door saying, "Trunks that wasn't the worse you have fought on the twenty recordings against Vegeta, besides your father was using one of his strongest moves in his Super Sayian 2 form," said Bulma looking to where Vegeta was a second a go,Vegeta: My strongest attack in Super Saiyan 2 is big bang attack woman! "He must have left to go train, how 'bout you give it a break and rest for a couple of hours?" suggested Bulma. Trunks then nodded and left to go change.Trunks: Me? A couple of hours? I was just part of a video recording. Hmph. [spoiler=Episode 1 - Part 2 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,225)]Gohan felt a very strong Ki towards the North,where the Dragon Ball Shrine is,and also where all seven Dragon Balls were, Goku: Ive never been so proud of his intelligence. "I have to get there before they get inside and make a wish on the Dragon Balls,even if Father stops trys to stop them he may fail with a Ki that strong!"Goku: Me? Fail? Im the canon character! I never fail.Vegeta: Give it up... Gohan then made a mad dash towards the Dragon Ball Shrine.......Nappa: Hey, Im back here again.Vegeta: What else is he going to do? Slither? When he arrived he saw that Vegeta and Piccolo were fighting off three strong villans:Broly,Cell and a unknown demonish monster. How could Broly and Cell get out of Hell?! Gohan thought, Goku: They left?Vegeta: The gates broke?Trunks: I gave them my tape worm?All: Uh...Janemba: I refuse to be called demonish. And I am not unknown. In the time line youre on about, you should know me by now. he then turned into Ultimate Gohan(Mystic Gohan) and dove into the battle..........Gohan: Apparently I dont need the Z Sword anymore. "Vegeta! What is that monster?!" yelled Piccolo while dodging Broly's punches, when Gohan came and delivered a mortal blow to Cell.Cell: Yeah, let Gohan kill me again.Piccolo: He seems familiar. His name was...Janefu...Janambe...Janemba? Nah. I think it was just Jan.Vegeta: Im the only one who has an actual memory!Gohan: Yeah, take my MORTAL blow! Im from the videogame series, Mortal Kombat.Goku: ...FALCOOOOOWN PAUNCH! "Its name is Janemba!" said Vegeta fighting the evil monster Janemba.Vegeta: I think the other likes Janemba. He made me say his name, and then repeated it in the same sentence.Gohan: Maybe he just cant write. "Hahahahaha,I remember you!" said Janemba,"The only way you stoped me was using the Fusion Technique, whch wont work now!" said Janemba pulling out his sword,Vegeta: See? I told you we had seen him before.Piccolo and Gohan: ...Janemba: Oww. Ripping off skin and using it as a sword hurts. "Ready to dance with death?!" while stabbing into Vegeta's armor.Vegeta: I was meant to go to the club and dance with him yesterday. "Noooooo!!" said Gohan as he was fighting Cell, "I'm getting tired of this Cell! Super Kamehameha!" said Gohan when he was about to release the blast Janemba grabbed Gohan and stabbed him letting go of the sword.Cell: Sure, now kill me exactly the same way as you did in the series aswell.Broly: Why does this remind me of the actual Janemba movie?Gohan: Super Exclamation Mark on a sentence which didnt need one haaaa! "Gohan!" said Piccolo as Broly threw him against rock solid stone,"Go........han.......go.....to....Den....de" said Piccolo as he transported him to Dende's Tower.Piccolo: I have enough power to teleport you safely out of battle, to a place tens of miles away, but not to get up and just help you up. "Gohan!" yelled Dende as he saw the bleeding Sayian on the ground with a sword in him,"Don't worry Gohan I will heal you!" said Dende.Dende: I will take this skin out of you, then magically heal it because I cant do anything else.Gohan: Really, Im not hurt. Im telling you, Im fine. This is just blood which came from Janemba! He took off skin, after all. "Den......de......Broly........Cell....and..........Janemba....are going to get the Dragon Balls...." said Gohan........"Gohan,I will heal you!" said Dende desprately trying to heal the mortal wounds."Dende......warn....the...others........" said Gohan before he died.Gohan: Dont heal me! Just let me die while I tell you to warn the others, which I could have done after you quickly healed me.Vegeta: And there goes another Canon! And how am I talking? Didnt Janemba just kill me, like he did with nearly everyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 1 - Part 1 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,224)]It was 12:00 PM on Earth in the Plains that Vegeta and Trunks were training.....Goku: Like Father like Son.Vegeta: Hmph...You train with your son everyday. Yeah...Train. "Big Bang Attack!" said Vegeta aiming it at Trunks. Trunks dodged the blast and turned Super Sayian.Goku: Is that the only attack you know?Vegeta: Yessum.Goku: And how did Trunks go super saiyan without even trying?Bulma: Hes a son of mine.All: ... Trunks un-sheathed the sword he got from Tapion.Goku: I always thought it was tape worm. When is this set, anyway?Trunks: I didnt get a sword. I actually got a real tape worm. Really...I never got a sword. Trunks charged to Vegeta in the air ready to go for a deathly blow, Vegeta dodged the stab and hit Trunks so hard Trunks went crashing to the ground a mile away.Bulma: You just killed my son!Vegeta: Oh well babe...Now we can have alone time?Goku: o.O Time to go Super Sayian 2 thought Vegeta, he then transformed into Super Sayian 2 form.Goku: Now you can go Super Saiyan 2 without trying? I even had to try to go super saiyan when I was in GT, which is when my power level was clearly over 9000!!!! "Time to die Trunks, hahahahahaha!" said Vegeta while spreading his arms apart on both sides of his body, "Final Flash!" said Vegeta closing both hands together and shooting a beam from both hands together.Nappa: Hey, why am I here?Omega Shenron: That attack is only attainable at a super saiyan 4 level... The beam then penetrated Trunk' armor strait into his chest........The training room Bulma made that simulates battles transformed back into its original state.Goku: Thats right. Kill him, and then bring him back to life in a click sort of way.Chi-Chi: Wont we get sued for copyright of the word click? "Father,you beat me again. I have failed,for the twenieth time." said Trunks with a playful smile on his face,"You still should try to fight Piccolo or Gohan."Vegeta: Yes, you puny insignificant fool. THE 20TH TIME!Gohan: Apparently, as me being the son of the most canon-character, I am stronger then you.Piccolo: As am I. I was Gokus rival in the original series, so I must be stronger.Goku: You could have atleast put a space there. Bulma then walked through a door saying, "Trunks that wasn't the worse you have fought on the twenty recordings against Vegeta, besides your father was using one of his strongest moves in his Super Sayian 2 form," said Bulma looking to where Vegeta was a second a go,Vegeta: My strongest attack in Super Saiyan 2 is big bang attack woman! "He must have left to go train, how 'bout you give it a break and rest for a couple of hours?" suggested Bulma. Trunks then nodded and left to go change.Trunks: Me? A couple of hours? I was just part of a video recording. Hmph. [spoiler=Episode 1 - Part 2 (Mystery Science Ripoff - #5,607,225)]Gohan felt a very strong Ki towards the North,where the Dragon Ball Shrine is,and also where all seven Dragon Balls were, Goku: Ive never been so proud of his intelligence. "I have to get there before they get inside and make a wish on the Dragon Balls,even if Father stops trys to stop them he may fail with a Ki that strong!"Goku: Me? Fail? Im the canon character! I never fail.Vegeta: Give it up... Gohan then made a mad dash towards the Dragon Ball Shrine.......Nappa: Hey, Im back here again.Vegeta: What else is he going to do? Slither? When he arrived he saw that Vegeta and Piccolo were fighting off three strong villans:Broly,Cell and a unknown demonish monster. How could Broly and Cell get out of Hell?! Gohan thought, Goku: They left?Vegeta: The gates broke?Trunks: I gave them my tape worm?All: Uh...Janemba: I refuse to be called demonish. And I am not unknown. In the time line youre on about, you should know me by now. he then turned into Ultimate Gohan(Mystic Gohan) and dove into the battle..........Gohan: Apparently I dont need the Z Sword anymore. "Vegeta! What is that monster?!" yelled Piccolo while dodging Broly's punches, when Gohan came and delivered a mortal blow to Cell.Cell: Yeah, let Gohan kill me again.Piccolo: He seems familiar. His name was...Janefu...Janambe...Janemba? Nah. I think it was just Jan.Vegeta: Im the only one who has an actual memory!Gohan: Yeah, take my MORTAL blow! Im from the videogame series, Mortal Kombat.Goku: ...FALCOOOOOWN PAUNCH! "Its name is Janemba!" said Vegeta fighting the evil monster Janemba.Vegeta: I think the other likes Janemba. He made me say his name, and then repeated it in the same sentence.Gohan: Maybe he just cant write. "Hahahahaha,I remember you!" said Janemba,"The only way you stoped me was using the Fusion Technique, whch wont work now!" said Janemba pulling out his sword,Vegeta: See? I told you we had seen him before.Piccolo and Gohan: ...Janemba: Oww. Ripping off skin and using it as a sword hurts. "Ready to dance with death?!" while stabbing into Vegeta's armor.Vegeta: I was meant to go to the club and dance with him yesterday. "Noooooo!!" said Gohan as he was fighting Cell, "I'm getting tired of this Cell! Super Kamehameha!" said Gohan when he was about to release the blast Janemba grabbed Gohan and stabbed him letting go of the sword.Cell: Sure, now kill me exactly the same way as you did in the series aswell.Broly: Why does this remind me of the actual Janemba movie?Gohan: Super Exclamation Mark on a sentence which didnt need one haaaa! "Gohan!" said Piccolo as Broly threw him against rock solid stone,"Go........han.......go.....to....Den....de" said Piccolo as he transported him to Dende's Tower.Piccolo: I have enough power to teleport you safely out of battle, to a place tens of miles away, but not to get up and just help you up. "Gohan!" yelled Dende as he saw the bleeding Sayian on the ground with a sword in him,"Don't worry Gohan I will heal you!" said Dende.Dende: I will take this skin out of you, then magically heal it because I cant do anything else.Gohan: Really, Im not hurt. Im telling you, Im fine. This is just blood which came from Janemba! He took off skin, after all. "Den......de......Broly........Cell....and..........Janemba....are going to get the Dragon Balls...." said Gohan........"Gohan,I will heal you!" said Dende desprately trying to heal the mortal wounds."Dende......warn....the...others........" said Gohan before he died.Gohan: Dont heal me! Just let me die while I tell you to warn the others, which I could have done after you quickly healed me.Vegeta: And there goes another Canon! And how am I talking? Didnt Janemba just kill me, like he did with nearly everyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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