[FIRST CARD!] Primeval Primate - Hanumana

[Imminence]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all Beast-Type monsters from both players Graveyard. This card gains 100 ATK for each removed from play Beast-Type monsters. When a card would be Special Summoned or when a Beast-Type monster you control would be destroyed, you can return 3 removed from play Beast-Type monsters to their controller's Graveyards instead.

 

 

Rate please, Please be nice. It is my first card

[5252345262667]

Nice card. 2 OCG errors. Never say "if this card would be" . Always say it in a present meaning, not future tense. (i.e. "if this card IS destroyed you can..."

 

Other than that, not a bad card. I have to say it's overpowered by its effect that you can just remove 3 beast warriors. But, it's not too overpowered, atleast it loses 300 ATK every time you use that effect.

 

Actually, nevermind. That dosen't seem overpowered at all to me now. Nice card, fix those 2 OCG errors about (if this card would be) and you get a 3/5!

[jake#1]

this is good 4/5

[Hungry Panda]

its actually pretty well rounded. you get a solid 6.5/10

[Allynpop]

I love it! Salsha fixed the OCG, so...But I like the picture as well. A Unique card. I would add it to a Beast/Beast-Warrior Deck. And it's not Overpowered because of its originally low ATK and its drawback. 8/10. Keep up the good work!

[Yang Xiao-Long]

OCG:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all Beast-Type monsters in both player's Graveyards. This card gains 100 ATK for each Beast-Type monster removed by this effect. When a card is Special Summoned or when a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, you can return 3 removed from play Beast-Type monsters to their controller's Graveyards instead."

 

Or something like that. How are you gonna remove from play all Beast-Type monsters from both Graveyards?

I must say though, your OCG is impressive for a new member.

The pic suits the card.

8/10

[touzaikokon]

Very busy, so I'll make this quick:

 

Effect: 3 points. +.5 originality

Original, very creative. I like it.

 

Grammar: 2 points.

You missed some stuff, but other people addressed it.

 

Style: 2.5 points.

Looks good. I have a thing about set numbers. But I'm only taking off .5 for that.

 

 

Overall: 8/10

[5252345262667]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all Beast-Type monsters from both players Graveyard. This card gains 100 ATK for each removed from play Beast-Type monsters. When a card would be Special Summoned or when a Beast-Type monster you control would be destroyed' date=' you can return 3 removed from play Beast-Type monsters to their controller's Graveyards instead.

 

 

Rate please, Please be nice. It is my first card

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I just realized another mistake. When saying "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned ..." you can't say that. You have to say "...This card cannot be Special Summoned EXCEPT by removing...."

[Toot]

eh...

8/10