Zextra Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 Yet another Ice Barrier card: Lore:When "Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier" is in your Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK. Send 2 "Ice Barrier" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 non-Synchro monster from your Graveyard with its ATK halved. When this card is removed from the field, you can remove from play 2 "Ice Barrier" monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Defense position. Image Credit to Jazin Kay I'm open to all suggestions!Please rate and comment! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imminence Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 i dun't like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 1000 ATK while you control "Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier". You can discard 2 "Ice Barrier" from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Ice Barrier" monster in your Graveyard, it is removed from play during the End Phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can remove from your Graveyard 2 "Ice Barrier" monsters to Special Summon this card in face-up Defence Position. This cards effect is negated if it was Special Summoned in this way. Even with that fix the card would still be overpowered. The image and name is good and doesn't need much improvement but the effect needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 Thanks for your suggestions! I'll update it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodz Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 the image and the name doesn't fit with ice barrier dragon and the effect need fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 19, 2010 Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 lol doesn't lok like a dragon6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Thanks! Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 OCG:"When "Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier" is in your Graveyard, this card gains 1000 ATK. Send 2 "Ice Barrier" monsters from your Deck (to where?) to Special Summon 1 non-Synchro monster from your Graveyard with its ATK halved. When this card is removed from the field, you can remove from play 2 "Ice Barrier" monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Defense position." You need to specify where you specify sending the "Ice Barrier" monster to. I'm assuming the Graveyard, so add that bit in.Pic fits the card. I believe it's from Jazin Kay's archive, so be sure to give credit.Seems like a balanced effect to me, although that 1000 ATK bonus might be a little much (2700 ATK for a Level 5?) Other than that, the card seems great. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Aiku and Phanax: ... AHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! But seriously, what is that? OCG: Already corrected. Effect: Magician Girl/Hundred Eyes Dragon clone. That's all I have to say. Image and Name: The Magician Girl had more grace than this. Overall: 5.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33T M45T3R CJ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I give it a 10/10, though it would probably be banned almost immediately, if this card was made. though i do like the pic, it really fits, considering that a dragoness does not need to look like a dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 i dun't like it You should at least specify why you dislike this card' date=' instead of just saying "I don't like it.". I give it a 10/10, though it would probably be banned almost immediately, if this card was made. Actually, to me? It wouldn't be banned, probably limited, because there aren't many Ice Barriers. It would probably be limited. Nice creativity on the effect, pretty balanced, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Ok. I edited the OCG and the effect. I lowered the ATK bonus down from 1000 to 700. Also, I added the image credit to Jazin Kay. Thanks for all your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King of Yesonia Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 "Dragoness". I love Ice Barrier monsters. I think this would be a good monster. But, it's only my opinion. However, in my opinion, I like it!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 well it's not bad but it felt weird about it.... the effects may be good but something about it is too weird. it may be me though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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