ExecutiveProducer Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 1000 Life Points and Tributing 2 Light monsters. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Level 6 monsters or below and gains 100 ATK for ever LIGHT monster you have in your graveyard. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on your Opponent's side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 all the ocg fixes i can point out. attack is ATKlight is LIGHTopponents side of the field. ask someone else for the full fix up. besides your ocg sucking the effect is pretty blan. pictures not the best. and this being your first card ill give you a 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExecutiveProducer Posted June 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 funny how you suck at grammar and can't spell bland. Thanks anyway for commenting, and fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Effect: 2 points.It's a target-immune ATK-heavy force of destruction that you can drop with 2 LIGHT monsters. It also has built-in MST. Definitely overpowered. Also, it doesn't say you can't Normal Summon it, so I guess if you have the 2 LIGHT monsters, you could Normal Summon it anyway and avoid the 800 LP cost. OCG: 2 points.Fixes in bold.This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 800 Life Points and Tributing 2 LIGHT monsters. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Level 6 or lower monsters. This card gains 100 ATK for every LIGHT monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn' date=' [b']you can pay[/b] 800 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. Style: 1.5 points.Card has all the typical card stuff, but your pic is meh. The image is zoomed out too far and just looks like some old guy in the clouds. Could at least be zoomed in some more. Overall: 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Really not as bad as he says it is, pic could use a crop though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 800 Life Points and Tributing 2 Light monsters. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Level 6 monsters or below and gains 100 ATK for ever LIGHT monster you have in your graveyard. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, destroy one Spell or Trap card on your Opponent's side of the field. to Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by paying 800 Life Points and tributing 2 LIGHT monsters you control. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Level 6 monsters or below. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every LIGHT monster in your graveyard. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Also definitely OP'd because it already has a high ATK and yet, 100 ATK for every LIGHT monster in the graveyard? Lightsworns, which can send other Lightsworns in the deck to the graveyard can boost this ATK a lot. Also, the original ATK of this card is basically 3200 because the monsters tributed. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 funny how you suck at grammar and can't spell bland. Thanks anyway for commenting' date=' and fixed.[/quote'] im tired. and im typing fast. and i will admit this. im not the best person on OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperNarb Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Awww monster don't be so harsh I think this card is better then most people do for their first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExecutiveProducer Posted June 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Thanks supernarb. Fixed OCG just now... i think the forum crashed five times.. lmaothe overpowered 30 deathstick got lowered to 20... fixed the ocg, thanks zetaru and dchi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 It's not bad, especially for your first card. It has quite a variety of effects and they all seem balanced to me.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 This is good not the best but good i give it a 7/10 good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Awww monster don't be so harsh I think this card is better then most people do for their first card. I'm not harsh, i just tell it like it is. His OCG was messed up. and since im getting beat up abouit this and after seeing your better ocg, ill raise it up to a 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allynpop Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 "This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Level 6 monsters or below..." Change below to lower and I'll give it a 9/10. Great work, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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