First Semi-Real Tag

[Lyfe.]

In my sig.

 

CnC

[Night]

Im guessing this would be an abstract? Well lucky for you I own in that department. First off I kind of like how you actually have a real focal.

 

But then, It is killed by the text. First of all if you're going to use text in an abstract make several versions, it gets to a bigger audience. Second the text must blend with the tag, something this does, but just barely, compromising some blue would have helped. But the worst of the text is that it's way to far from the focal, creating a double focal, not good.

 

Ehh but You got some decent flow as well as depth, so thats an achievement i guess.

 

My advice would be too add another version without the text, some better lighting, a quick cleanup of the c4ds, and just entirely remove that disgusting border. But you'll get better.

[Lyfe.]

I don't normally make graphics; this is actually my first in a few months.

 

Although I'm probably not gonna change it. I'll have to remake the entire thing if I do. It's saved flattened.

 

But I will take your advice for any other tags I may do in the future. Thanks :)

[ProSora]

Although I'm probably not gonna change it. I'll have to remake the entire thing if I do. It's saved flattened.

 

thats why you always save the psd

as for the sig, monotone D=

you did good at depth though

the text is blah and doesn't blend

the border should either blend with the sig or should not be there at all

consider this is your first, its pretty good

[Lyfe.]

I can't find any good fonts D:

PSD? Please suck dick?

 

The border actually isn't black. If your screen is bright, it is somewhat translucent. =3

 

Anywho...Thanks for the comment :)

[Dark Paladin92]

Good job. It's probably better than what I could do :/

I like the effects and the focal, but I would do something about those words. Just my opinion.

Otherwise I'd give it an A if I were a teacher.