Futuristic Blood Warrior

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Lore: You may only activate this effect once, draw 2 cards if one of the cards is DARK-Type monster, this card gains 500 ATK.[/align]

[CMRenji]

OCG(Original Card Grammar) is off.

 

-Draw 2 cards. If one of them is a DARK monster, increase this card's ATK by 500. This effect can only be used once per Duel.

 

I think that's right. Besides that it's a pretty good card.

[Alfredbootman]

Really cool monster! I love the picture.

 

9.5/10

[touzaikokon]

Effect: 3 points.

This is pretty good. It's a nice little advantage engine with a limiter on it. The fact that you have to Tribute 2 monsters or Special Summon this card before you can use the effect helps to balance out the draw, so I'll go out on a limb and say this card is balanced.

 

You do realize, though, that you will have to reveal the DARK monster you drew.

 

Grammar: 1.5 points.

Fix:

 

"Draw 2 cards. If one of the cards is a DARK monster, this card gains 500 ATK. You can only activate this effect once per Duel."

 

Style: 1.5 points.

Pic is kinda busy. Also, your set name/number are just...numbers. I know it's a small thing to nitpick on, but it's a pet peeve.

 

 

Overall: 6/10

[Zextra]

Nice card, especially for a new member. The OCG has already been corrected. It has a nice limiter and drawback, combined with its Summoning requirements. Overall, really nice and balanced card! I hope you have fun and welcome to YCM! :D 9.5/10

[.Impact]

Dchi....once again THANK YOU

 

however you should not put increase this card's ATK. The way we are using the ffect dhould be. This monster gains 500 ATK. This is because a Spell or Trap cannot gain ATK. Unless its a trap monster....then u use card.

[FriendlyHost]

cool card, but since it has a small effect, you should make it draw 1 card and make it level 4. 7.5/10 very good for a beginner

[Toot]

lol this is kewl

7.5/10