My First Card

[Waafey]

 

This card cannot be special summoned. This card can only be normal summoned by tributing 2 beast-type monsters on your side of the field. When this card is tribute summoned succesfully, destroy all face-up monsters except beast-type monsters on the field.

[GrogMan]

Nice job for a first card. But try to post your cards at better times. Right here its 2:00 night time. Your just lucky im awake. At other places this might not be a good time either.

[Zextra]

Overall, nice job, especially for your first card. Little OCG problems. Correct OCG should be:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 2 Beast-Type monsters on your side of the field. When this card is Tribute Summoned succesfully, destroy all face-up non Beast-Type monsters on the field.

 

(I think; not so good with OCG myself)

 

Overall, pretty balanced.

One thing, the pic kinda looks more like a dragon than a beast, but that's just my opinion :D!

Welcome to YCM and I hope to see more good stuff from you! 9/10

[The God of Darkness]

Nice card I give it a 8/10 check out my first card please rate

[ChaosIncarn]

Nice card I give it a 8/10 check out my first card please rate

 

Don't post your cards in other peoples threads. Make your own.

 

Now, on to Waafey's card. Many kudos for making a beast support. Seen the pic often enough, but still, as said, not bad at all for your first card.

 

Just brush up on some OCG and you'll be in great shape.

 

8/10

[Waafey]

Thanks for your comments

[Zinodin]

Cool card although I've seen the pic on some other cards.

7/10

[~Shin~]

6/10

ok zmuzik fix it all excepet this

non Beast-Type = non-Beast-Type

well it is useful card and the easiest to summon 3000 ATK beast monster.. after "Andro Sphinx"...it is the second highest atk beast type after "Theinen The Great Sphinx"...just showing why is it good.