xAwKx Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 [align=center] Lore: This card can only be special summoned by removing 3 Machine-Type monsters from your graveyard from play. If this card attacks your opponent directly decrease the ATK of this card by 1500.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by removing 3 Machine-type monsters from your Graveyard from play. Halve this card's ATK until the end of the Battle Phase when this card attacks your opponent directly. Pretty good for a new member, but it's a bit too easy to summon. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Machine-Type monsters from your Graveyard. If this card attack directly, halve its ATK." Or something like that.Pic suits the card.I don't really see any use though. It's just a massive drawback if this card ever attacks directly. Stats are a bit OPed; 3000 for both ATK and DEF? Lower one or the other. Since you're new, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Okay let me see, well the name could use a little more creativity, image is fine but can be better i think it's from Jayzin's archive, anyways good stats and bland yet interesting effect but need some correcting ill fix it for you. OCG Fix: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Machine-Type monsters from your graveyard. If this card attacks your opponents Life Points directly its ATK is halved during damage calculation only. Now my rating (if i may) is: 5.5/10 Notes: Remember to try harder next making cards is not just fun its also an art and takes time. You cannot just scramble some images and letters together and call it art. It takes dedication and if it does not work the 1st time you might get it the 2nd or 3rd time around so don't worry keep trying and by time you'll get it we all were (noobs) once but it gets better. -Peace/ M.B X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tainted Black Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard. If this card attacks directly, halve its ATK." IGNORE The OCG They are saying, this is correct. I am fine with the 3000 ATK but lower the DEF to about 2100 or so. SERIOUS DRAWBACK: With how you worded it, it permanently loses 1500 when it attacks directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wexfordlad1 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 It ok not great but but since you are a new member 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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