MaroonX Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Here's a spell for ya that i made with card maker using a pic in image archive by: Wanderley Select any number of monsters on your opponent side of the field with an ATK of 1500 or more. Take control of the selected monster(s) until the end phase. If the selected monster is removed from the field, Special Summon it in Attack Position on your opponent side of the field ignoring the Summoning condition. The ATK of all monster Summoned by this effect are doubled Comment,rate,ect. pls,I BEG YOU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caner5000 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I give it a 6/10, comments:You put to much words when you could of summed it up with fewer words. For example, you could of put: "When this card is activated, Select any of your opponents monster with an ATK of 1500 or more and control that monster until the end of your turn. If the selected monster(s) are sent to the graveyard, Special Summon them in Face-up on your opponent's side of the field, double the ATK." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Forgot a period at the end.Some places you forgot to capilize and some you capalized by mistake.The pic is sort of diffrentI don't really like the name.Oh and the effect is so opedkay thnx bai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 You have some OCG and grammar problems, but nice pic and effort! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 okay maybe i should change it too"Take control of the selected monster(s) until the end phase"? okay,i edit it a bit, how about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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