yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 This is the perfect comenation in my opinion1st how about a ritual2ndthe dragon3rd th knight4th the fusion5th the super tuner6th and finally the synchronHOW ABOUT THAT FOR A COMBINATION Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 It is a Combination but a couple of things wrong: 1-The Game already has a 5 Headed Dragon.2-They are kind of Overpowered.3-Although a Combination it isn't a very Good One. So i would have to give these Cards a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj123 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 well OCG errors.. five headed dragon already exists and thats it. The combo is modicore.. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 ohh come on i know F.G.D but this is a totaly defrent card and i guess a good combenation there is a synchro summon and a tuner monster plus an equip spell finally the fusion all cards can work 2 gether Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj123 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 oh ya about your synchro... what do you mean by points? attack or defence? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Actually a Good Combination is usually made of 2 or 3 Cards like Plaguespreader, Malicious and some other card this is a like biraj said a mediocre combo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 both that why i didnt say attack or defyou see the combo is the dragon when u ritual summon him he can bring back the dragon kinght and when there is a warrior type monster i can bring back my darkness sword and when i have the 2 of them i can synchro summon and after that equip my sword 2 the synchro monster or just equio it from the begining and the final trick i can fusion summon both of the dragon and the dragon knight to summon the knight of the light so how about this for a comboyou see the combo is the dragon when u ritual summon him he can bring back the dragon kinght and when there is a warrior type monster i can bring back my darkness sword and when i have the 2 of them i can synchro summon and after that equip my sword 2 the synchro monster or just equio it from the begining and the final trick i can fusion summon both of the dragon and the dragon knight to summon the knight of the light so how about this for a comboyou see the combo is the dragon when u ritual summon him he can bring back the dragon kinght and when there is a warrior type monster i can bring back my darkness sword and when i have the 2 of them i can synchro summon and after that equip my sword 2 the synchro monster or just equio it from the begining and the final trick i can fusion summon both of the dragon and the dragon knight to summon the knight of the light so how about this for a combo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 its an ok combo culd be better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 may i know how for the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeal1995 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Well I say 0/10 cause it was very bad I think you should kill yourself with fire I dont kniow something that make you sufer..... I am just kidding talking seriosly I will give you a 6.5 and there are some OCG errors (I really dont know why everybody focus on the errors they never see the good things they see them when the cards is super cool) I have them to sooooooooo good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 will thanx i saw ur cards they were awsome i rated them about 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vediavis Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 [spoiler=Things that need fixing][spoiler=5 Headed dragon]1. There is already a 5 headed dragon in the game [spoiler=Here it is] 2. if you insist on keeping your 5 headed dragon than add a background.3. When this card is summoned to the field you can summon one level 5 or 7 Warrior-Type monster from your deck to the field. [spoiler=The Knight of the Dragon]1. this card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "5 Headed Dragon".2. When this card is successfully summoned to the field send all Magic and Trap cards on your opponents side of the field to the graveyard [spoiler=The Knight of the Light]1. This card can be summoned by removing the fusion material in your graveyard from play.2. This card gains 500 ATK points for each card in your hand. [spoiler=Sword of the darkness]1. This card can be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. 2. When you have a Warrior-Type monster on the field, you can Special Summon this card from the graveyard. [spoiler=The master of Darkness]1. This card gains 500 ATK points for each card in your hand. Other than that nice idea 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Several OCG errors can be found here, and some are OP. You shouldn't boast about your cards being really good before knowing what at least 2 people's opinions first. Plus, not only OCG errors, but spelling errors are here too! Plus, Ultimate Rare, DIVINE, Divine-Beast, and Level 12 are all noobish (I know you only used 1 of those) Ritual Spell: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Five Headed Dragon". You must also tribute or discard monsters whose total level add up to 7 or more. Okay. Ritual Monster: This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card, "The Star of the Dragon". When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 5 to 7 Warrior-type monster from your deck. OP. Rituals are pretty easy to bring out. TKD: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Five Headed Dragon". When this card is Summoned, you can destroy every Spell and Trap Card your opponent controls. Fusion Card (The name rhymes :P): Five Headed Dragon + The Knight of the DragonThis card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the required Fusion Materials. This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon. (You do not use "Polymerization") When this card is Summoned, increase your Life Points by 500 x every card in your hand. When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can tribute this card to negate the effect and destroy it. Underpowered, because it's a one time use. But... if it was as much as you want, like Stardust, it would also be OP. SD (I don't think you can make a double Tuner / Union, so I'm getting rid of the equip): You can tribute this card to destroy a face-up monster your opponent controls. If you control a face-up Warrior-type monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, this card cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. I added a restriction to prevent any OP'dness, because at least Plaguespreader Zombie and Quillbolt Hedgehog are removed from play after they use their effect. MD: Sword of the Darkness + 1 or more Warrior-type non-tuner monstersIncrease the ATK of this card by 100 x every card in your hand. If you have no cards in your hand, you can attack directly with this card. Very OP, because you can use a hand destruction card, like Rope of Life to bring this from your Graveyard, it has ATK boost, and then attack directly for more than 3000 damage. I disagree, these cards would not make a good "combo". 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 thank u but what do u think like say 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 >_> Are you serious? Read my post again... but this time, the very end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 and thanx but in my opinion(i respect urs ofcorce they are a very good combo)it wasnt 4 u 4 the 1 b4 u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Everyone has different opinions. Not to be offensive, but you can't just have your own opinion and shut out other peoples'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 i didnt mean that i ment i like those cards tats all no shut out other Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I know, I'm just saying you should acknowledge other people's opinions. I'm saying that you shouldn't say things like "If this isn't good, then what is?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 u got a point here any advice on the cards how to make a better version Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Hm... just fix the OCG and make your Synchro weaker, and they'll be good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 btw what is ocg and thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 OCG - Official Card Grammar.It's how the effect is written - do you have good capitalisation, is lvl typed as LVL and other things.Your OCG is a FAiL.So are the pics.The effects are simple but ok.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yusieatlas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Effect(s): 1 point.A couple are okay on their own, but as a whole, this combination is pretty poor and drawn out. The combo doesn't replace the advantage it loses fast enough to be usable. While it was neat that you used a Ritual, NOMI, Fusion, Tuner and a Synchro, most of those tend to destroy advantage pretty quickly. OCG: 0 points.Atrocious. If you don't mind me asking, is English not your first language? Because this card has poor grammar, much less Official Card Grammar. You probably need to go here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html That will help you greatly. Style: 1 point.You have pictures. That's about it. Two lack backgrounds, and one is so overused it's not even funny. Yeah. Overall: 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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