lillostdemon Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Im kinda new at this >.> So bare with it and any help would be greatly aprecitated :D Lore: Special summon 2 level 4 or lower Warrior type monsters from your graveyard to the field.Lore:During your Standby Phase, by paying 1000 life points and sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Bloody Swordsman LV8" from your hand.Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Bloody Swordsman LV4".Lore:During your Standby Phase, send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Lady Knight LV6" from your hand or Deck.Lore:Send 1 Spell Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up Spell card on your opponent's side of the field. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as the result of battle, send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Lady Knight LV8" from your hand or Deck.Lore:Send 1 Spell Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy all face-up Spell cards on your opponent's side of the field. Hope I did atlest okay on these cards :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 kewl OCGKewl picsGood job8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 OCG isn't bad at all, and best of all your cards aren't OP'd(OverPowered). However, they seem a little unimaginative and weak. Try taking the liberty of adding some interesting effects to them, yeah? Make 'em mill your opponents deck or return a card to an owner's hand -- something! I think you get the point, but good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 very nice for a beginner 9.5/10 good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Nice for a beginner, please do add effects! Your spell card is a bit OP in my opinion, die it down to 1 and add a cost or something.Pics 1/1OCG 6/6Balance 1.5/3Overall 8.5/10Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gir Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Hmm.. Nice.But try switching the pictures with "Lady Knight LV4 with Lady Knight LV6"Lady Knight LV4 Looks more advanced then Lady Knight LV6.And, on the bottom left corner of the picture, you have "LOVER"Put either, LIMITED EDITION or 1st EDITION.[/b]Moving on.I love how your new to this, and yet you have made 6 great cards.Il give it a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 WELCOME TO YCM!!! Good job, especially for a new member! Not many OCG mistakes. Effects are a bit bland, but I'll let that go because you are a beginner. I see lots of potential in you. Good luck, have fun here at YCM, and keep up the good work! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 I love the way how lady knight dies her hair in different pics XD7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 i really like them especially the first spell 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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