TableCloth358 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 I am starting over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Space Ranger Gold Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 the last line should be, "monster on the field, then remove this card from play." I think. Any ways, nothing to interesting. I was expecting something like: removing from play for 1 turn then special summon next turn, or something like that.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Eh there might be... I'm still making cards the'll get better this is kinda like a Preview. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Effect: 3 points.This is creative. The idea has merit, and I want to see how the group as a whole works together. Grammar: 2.5 points.Pretty spot on. Gonna agree with SRG's fix, so...yeah. Style: 3 points.Looks boss. Not much else to say about that.  Overall: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Effect: 3 points.This is creative. The idea has merit' date=' and I want to see how the group as a whole works together. Grammar: 2.5 points.Pretty spot on. Gonna agree with SRG's fix, so...yeah. Style: 3 points.Looks boss. Not much else to say about that.  Overall: 8.5/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate and comment, a few questions though. What do you mean "Looks Boss"? You said "The idea has merit" whats "merit"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Effect: 3 points.This is creative. The idea has merit' date=' and I want to see how the group as a whole works together. Grammar: 2.5 points.Pretty spot on. Gonna agree with SRG's fix, so...yeah. Style: 3 points.Looks boss. Not much else to say about that.  Overall: 8.5/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate and comment, a few questions though. What do you mean "Looks Boss"? You said "The idea has merit" whats "merit"?boss = good. just a colloquialism.saying the idea has merit is basically saying it has potential, or that it's a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Lol okay well i shall post another soon ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TableCloth358 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Bump will post another when i get more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Sinful~ Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 i would like to see how creative you could get with this new archtype and the warp counters idea for this card i would give it a 6/10 just because i dnt think its too powerful and i wouldnt use it in my deck and theres some minor OCG errorsBut keep making more warp monster i think you could get creative with em!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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