overheat Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 hope you like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_magician_girl Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 9/10 well balanced but the grammar needs work ^_^ keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Balanced some OCG capitalizaion and spelling eoors 3.4/5.1:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eXp3rT Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 its "one"not ine 8) and "The Pink Killer"`s Effect at the end wold be "owner of this card draws 1 card" 7/10 ^^ good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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