ajw139904 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeal1995 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 The effects are cool but the cards are waaaaay to Over Powered with poseidon I can attack twice I can finish my opponent in 5 turns to over powered keep the good work 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajw139904 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 thnx and ill work on the OP part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crushdag Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Poseidon is a ripoff of the EIs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajw139904 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 o yea i kno wen i made the card earthbound Immortals came to my head so i did a little tinkering a came up with an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 The effects are cool but the cards are waaaaay to Over Powered with poseidon I can attack twice I can finish my opponent in 5 turns to over powered keep the good work 6/10 what he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobicus Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 its not fair if your cards are immortal OPed way too much 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajw139904 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ok well tht is my arche type so it is fair and i did say i wud work on the OPed part didnt I. well ill post more and see if there still Oped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dabir Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 These work with the EIs as well as sounding like them, you know. Also: Immortal Deity DezerakThis card can attack twice per Battle Phase. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. You must play with one "Immortal" card in your hand revealed. If you do not reveal an "Immortal" card, this card is destroyed. Once per turn, discard one card. You can do this during any Phase of your turn. Immortal Greek God - PoseidonIf there is no active Field Spell Card, destroy this card. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. This card can attack twice per Battle Phase. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Immortal Card RevivalOnce per turn, you can return 1 "Immortal" card from your side of the field or your Graveyard to its owner's hand. Immortal BarrierThere can only be 1 face-up "Immortal Barrier" on the field. Other "Immortal" Spell or Trap Cards cannot be destroyed by card effects. Immortal HoleActivate only when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and Special Summon one "Immortal" monster from your hand in face-up Attack Position. Punctuation and spelling are everything, and never abbreviate "Attack" as ATK unless you're referring to the ATK value of the card. Always look for cards which have similar effects to find out how you should write your card text. A couple of things need clarification - I'd advise specifying a specific Phase for Dezerak to discard a card, and I'm only guessing that you meant for Immortal Hole to Special Summon from the hand - but otherwise, just watch your spelling and punctuation. Hyphens in card names have a space before and after, full stops/periods always have a space afterwards and you misspelled "Barrier" in the name of "Immortal Barrier". One more thing, "Immortal Card Revival" isn't a very good name, think of a better one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ajw139904 Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ok thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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